Date: Apr 15, 2021 7:15 pm Title: Sunshine and Rainbows
I loved this story. I had it narrowed down to either Ethan or Michael, but then was right on the money with Ethan. And if he thought he was getting leniancy after brutally killing people, he is truly not playing with a full deck!!
Date: Apr 15, 2021 5:54 pm Title: Raise You Up
This was a great little story; I loved it!!
Date: Apr 15, 2021 3:39 pm Title: I'll Cover You
This was a great story!! I loved it!!
Date: Apr 14, 2021 3:09 pm Title: Bittersweet Promise
I just found this story yesterday and just finished reading it. This was a great one from beginning to end!!
Author's Response:
Sarah,
Thank you. We had a great time writing this one. This is just one of a series of stories. If you scroll down you can click on Bittersweet Universe and read the the other stories in the series. The other stories go into things that were mentioned in this story. Enjoy
~charming1 and Lorie~





Date: May 26, 2020 8:52 pm Title: Coming Clean
😂😠loved this.
Date: Feb 15, 2020 7:15 pm Title: I'll Cover You
good
Author's Response:
Angelika,
Glad you enjoyed reading our story again.
~charming1 & Lorie
Date: Feb 15, 2020 5:29 pm Title: Raise You Up
good one
Author's Response:
Angelika,
So happy you are reading our stories again. It's great that people enjoy them.
~charming1 & Lorie
Date: Jan 06, 2020 2:58 pm Title: Bittersweet Promise
Just love it.. Great writing
Author's Response:
Angelika,
Glad you enjoyed our story.
~charming1 & Lorie
Date: Jan 06, 2020 6:09 am Title: Bittersweet Promise
such Bastards..that is Michael, Curtis and Lindsey
Date: Aug 23, 2019 4:00 am Title: Sunshine and Rainbows
had toread it again, thanks
Date: Jul 23, 2019 3:08 pm Title: Raise You Up
Love it. Always liked Ted. Brian is something else like always, just have to love him





Date: May 03, 2019 3:49 am Title: 7 (Prince Tribute)
I always thought that Justin was the messy one, I could be wrong.
Date: Nov 21, 2018 4:40 am Title: 7 (Prince Tribute)
good one
Date: Nov 21, 2018 4:17 am Title: Raise You Up
great story, bless Ted and Blake, Brian and Justin
Date: Nov 03, 2018 5:01 pm Title: Sunshine and Rainbows
Love it
I figuered it was Eathan who did the killing
Date: May 19, 2018 10:42 pm Title: Raise You Up
A HAPPY ENDING..... About time deb and Carl were married, I love the way you keep the characters so real that I can actually picture the scenes in my head.... thanks for sharing
Date: May 02, 2018 12:12 am Title: I'll Cover You
Wonderful insight into the lives of Em and Drew.
Great job.
Date: Apr 08, 2018 11:54 pm Title: Raise You Up
*Baby primate*
I snorted coffee from my nose...thanks! 😄
Author's Response:
Kellydeer,
Always loved when Justin threw himself at Brian and he smiled and caught him, so sweet.
Who wouldn't want to hang onto that body.
~charming1 & Lorie~

Date: Apr 06, 2018 9:29 am Title: Raise You Up
Oh yess that's a happy ending Deb and Carl ! It's only time !!! Thank you great story.
Author's Response:
Marie-France,
Everyone deserves a happy ending.
You're very welcome.
Glad you enjoyed it.
~charming1 & Lorie~
Date: Apr 05, 2018 11:57 pm Title: Raise You Up
Beautiful ending. And Carl and Deb, about friggin' time.
Author's Response:
Sherry,
Thanks.
At least they finally got married.
~charming1 & Lorie~

Date: Apr 05, 2018 10:39 pm Title: Raise You Up
A fantastic ending. The only ones missing were Michael and Ben.
Author's Response:
Phyllis,
Michael has been ostracized from the family since it was discovered that he tried to split up Brian and Justin. After what Michael did, Ben divorced him and moved away.
~charming1 & Lorie~
Date: Apr 05, 2018 7:07 pm Title: Raise You Up
Wow, that was great. Could just picture all of it happening the way you wrote it. Wonderful.
Author's Response:
Marilynne,
Thanks.
We tried to keep the characters real.
~charming1 & Lorie~
Date: Apr 05, 2018 7:06 pm Title: Raise You Up
Great story! What a beautiful and eventful day!
Author's Response:
Claire,
Happy endings are great.
~charming1 & Lorie~