Date: Sep 22, 2017 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
Yeah that was interesting...to say the least! Wow! I'd say Justin was definitely beaten, isolated, verbally & emotionally abused, neglected and his father probably locked him away for a period of time too. I wish Justin would speak to Brian in person...maybe soon.
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 9:41 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
Loved this one so funny. Can Justin even talk?
Author's Response:
Yes, Justin *CAN* talk. But will Brian be able to do so? That's the question. TAG
PS. Go out and have some Indian Take Out of your own tonight! LOLOLOLOL.
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
I like Emmett's attitude. What happened to Justin that has him so shell-shocked?
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 9:02 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
I thought maybe you had a craving for an Indian type male? :-)
Author's Response:
Well, that too . . . LOL. TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Tool Time.
TOOL BELT TOOL BELT!!!!
Is it bad I kind of love Brian and Andy's relationship? It's so laid back and hot lol.
Anyway, on to my actual review, ahhh this is so so so so good. I love when Brian gets to spend time with Gus, seeing him as a daddy is so sexy. And I am totally picturing them hanging out and working on the house or yard together, so cuteeeeee!!!!
THANK GOD JUSTIN SAVED HIM FROM THE CANS omg.
Author's Response:
I thought you'd like that tool belt scene. . . LOL. TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 3:26 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Hey ...that was awesome update...loved it..poor justin that pathetic excuse of father craig must have tormated sunshine ..he must have trained justin not to speak just like he did not wanted him to sing in choir...by force...gosh soo many theories running in my mind...soo excited to know what u have planned ...update whenever u want ...we will read happily.
Author's Response:
It's so easy to hate Craig, but the Craig in this story is especially bad. Evil bad. TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 5:28 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Hey ...that was awesome update...loved it..poor justin that pathetic excuse of father craig must have tormated sunshine ..he must have trained justin not to speak just like he did not wanted him to sing in choir...by force...gosh soo many theories running in my mind...soo excited to know what u have planned ...update whenever u want ...we will read happily.
Date: Sep 22, 2017 5:14 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
How about that! Brian has a slightly different kind of ghostwriter! LOL
Yay! He convinced Justin to come out of the walls and join him. But OMG... it sounds like Justin needs a lot of help. And Brian is just the man to give him that help.
Figuring out why he is still hiding is a very big challenge!
Deb
Date: Sep 22, 2017 4:24 am Title: Chapter 10 - Gift Exchange
I love how Brian is taking care of Justin, providing him with food and drink.
Very clever of Brian to find a way to get Justin to accept the ‘gifts' he left out for him.
Nice to hear more about Justin's life, just wish I could figure out why he not only stays in the walls even though Craig is dead, but why he was there to begin with. I keep wondering why he didn't just run away. I'm wondering what Craig could have done to make Justin stay.
Looking forward to much more of this story.
Deb
Date: Sep 22, 2017 3:17 am Title: Chapter 9 - Hungry Ghosts
Awesome! Brian's investment in the house has turned into an investment in his health as well.
Well alright; Mikey finally gets it. He finally realizes that Brian was right to move to West Virginia, that he needed the solitude and even the work he was doing to fix up the house.
Ohhhh, Brian is finally catching on about his little gay ghostboy. Love it!
Deb
Date: Sep 22, 2017 1:59 am Title: Chapter 8 - Tool Time.
I like Andy; he seems like a fun fuckbuddy for Brian. You create some of the best original characters I've ever read.
Wow! I think I want to live in Brian's house, haunted or not! LOL
Brian's ghost boy is so sweet to take care of Gus when he had a bad dream. It's great that Gus isn't scared at all of the boy who lives in the walls.
Way to go, Justin! He saved Gus from possible injury!
Deb
Date: Sep 22, 2017 1:31 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Great "first contact!" I like how much bolder Justin is when talking to Brian on the tablet... he seems almost like the Justin we know. Yet, when he arrives at the dinner table, it's obvious that this Justin has some serious issues.
I am very curious to find out just how long Justin has been living like this... did he willingly go into hiding to avoid confrontation with Craig? Or was he forced into exile by Craig? And why did he remain in hiding after Craig was gone? Ooh, there are so many questions rolling around in my head!
Don't know what I'm going to do without a new chapter to read tomorrow night. :'-(
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2017 1:30 am Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Tag,
PTSD.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
You're partly right . . . TAG
Date: Sep 22, 2017 12:25 am Title: Chapter 7 - Visitations.
OMG! I hope Emmett gets to meet these ladies! That would be a hoot and a half!
‘Brian's Ladies' - I think the quilting group has a new name. LOL!
Good thing his little gay ghost was there to take care of him along with Deb showing up. He made sure that Deb could get in the house and even took care of his snotty tissues and brought him cold water and more steaming hot soup.
I'm not sure if I would be Penny or Sue Ann! LOL!
Deb
Date: Sep 21, 2017 11:16 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Sexy, Spooky Shenanigans
Oscar and Bill sound like a couple of fun guys to have a beer or two with.
Uh-oh! Brian's favorite dildo has disappeared! Now the ghost has gone too far!
Damn! I need a cold shower now!
Deb
Date: Sep 21, 2017 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Sweet Smiles
Looks like Brian's ghost reclaimed some of his possessions.
I really love your original characters. First Penny and now Sue Ann. These ladies are great and will really give Brian lots of smiles; especially if he continues to flirt with them. LOL!
OMG! That is one of my favorite pictures of Justin! (Okay, I know it's really Randy, but hey.) There is no way Brian could not be affected by that photo. *heavy sigh*
His novel is going to be awesome.
Deb
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2017 9:23 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
So far so good. Sharing a bed might be nice.
Author's Response:
You're really jumping ahead, LOL. Justin can't even talk to Brian yet, so I think it'll be a while before they're in the same bed. Then again, you never know . . . TAG
Date: Sep 21, 2017 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Haha of course it would take food to get Justin out of hiding lol But the poor thing! So unhealthy, hollowed cheeks and bony. Brian will fix that right up. I hope Justin talks to him next chapter. At least they were in the same room and started communicating. And just for the record, I LOVE your enthusiasm!
Date: Sep 21, 2017 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 4 - A Penny Worth of Thoughts.
Glad he got some much needed rest but happy he’s back at his house.
Love Penny! She’s a hoot!
Very clever of Brian to get Penny to talk about the Taylors!
Now there’s another mystery besides the one in Brian’s book!
Awww Penny is a sly one. She got Brian to help fix ‘little’ things around her house! Hahaha.
And now Brian is really spooked!
Deb
Date: Sep 21, 2017 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Loving this, their first proper meet, sweet and gentle. Look forward to more.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2017 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Justin is out Yeh !!! So sweet
Date: Sep 21, 2017 7:32 pm Title: Chapter 3 - The Boy In The Walls.
Love that Gus was the first to actually see the Boy in the Walls and how excited he got about having a room all his own in his daddy's house.
Wise decision Brian and Michael made about not telling Lindsay that Gus saw someone in the walls. She'd never let him come back again.
Hahaha! Michael wants to do an exorcism on Brian's house. He is certainly on a tear about ghosts. :)
At least some of the missing things are being returned. Brian can't complain about that! LOL!
Deb
Date: Sep 21, 2017 7:00 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
Great story, as usual from you Tag! Really enjoying.
Theory: his father had him convinced that he was to blame for his mother and sisters deaths and maybe abused him so he it traumatised. He stays in hiding as he thinks everyone will think he is a 'bad' person and maybe brainwashing about being gay from Daddy Homphobe.
Breath is bated for next chapter
Ta
Deb
Author's Response:
Good theory. You might have something there . . . TAG
Date: Sep 21, 2017 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 2 - The Infestation.
Gotta love Emmett! The whole infestation conversation was hilarious. Poor Ted and his sound machine. I think it was a really sweet offer to make.
And the spookiness begins!!!!
Deb
Date: Sep 21, 2017 6:29 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Moving Day.
I'm re-reading this so I can comment since I have some time today. This is off to a wonderful start. I really love how Brian tries to make Michael understand the benefits of moving to the 'wilds' of West Virginia. I bet a big part was simply to get away from Mikey! :) Glad to see Ted add his comments about how wise it was as an investment and that he would do it if he weren't allergic to manual labor. LOL! Even Emmett could see the prospects of the house. Michael will catch on eventually.
Deb