[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Yum. I want that pie! Now the only thing I could think of is if Justin shot Craig and he'd be doing the world a service if he did.
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 9:59 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Talking Points.
Sue Ann is legit my spirit animal, who wouldn't take advantage of feeling up Brian Kinney?
Brian tried to cook a meal for Justin omg, that's so cute and it shows how living in the country and away from Liberty Avenue works so well for him.
Facetiming Justin was a brilliant idea, and he actually spoke out, it may have been just one word, but he did it - and then he said goodnight, ahhh. Brian has got it baaaaaaad.
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 9:45 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Indian Take Out
I LOVE how Justin's smiley face was bolder than his original one, you could see how (albeit slowly) he was learning to become human again - even if it was over messenger.
It's so cute watching them learn to be around each other, and for Brian to actually enjoy the quiet "relationship" they have going on, he didn't think he would, but he does. He realises he was lonely, and that just having this quiet kid around eases that feeling a little.
OMG, I was not expecting that ending, and when I read it, I was so sure Justin would run, but he didn't. He stayed to watch, Can't wait to see what he makes of it.
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Tag,
Great chapter.
Love the Princess Bride quote too.
Write fast.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 9:15 pm Title: Chapter 11 - First Contact
I love that food was what tempted him out lmao, BUT THE BOY IS SO SKINNY :( But they met ahhhhh. I love how caring Brian is being, while also still being furious with Craig at what he's done to Justin.
Them talking over chat app was brilliant, and I love how Justin asked him why he was doing this, like he was scared but he had to know.
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Gift Exchange
Is it weird how much I love Penny? Can you find a way to include her in all your stories, please? It's so funny, because you know she'd be happy sleeping with or mothering Brian LOL.
I LOVE the gifts, and some of them were so thoughtful, especially the toiletries, I bet it felt really good to have a good clean after so long. MY HEART!
ALSO how fucking dare Craig blame Jennifer and Molly's death on Justin, that is despicable. Will he ever be able to get over that? :(
Well done, Brian on earning your boy's trust.
Date: Oct 03, 2017 8:44 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Poor Brian my ass! Look at that pie! Jesus I'd eat it all! lol Love love love their little morning session...more! At least Brian now has state of the art wiring throughout his house, yay. I bet Justin's input made his book even better. So glad he's starting to come out of his shell, the poor thing. He must have been through horrible things. Shanti seems like she knows her stuff...girl power!
Date: Oct 03, 2017 7:41 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Brian has made progress without even trying too "hard": his ghost was glued to him and didn't go away after awaking. The only tough part is when he wants answers.
Considering how Justin reacted in the first meeting the improvement is huge.
Can't wait for the next night...
Happy writing!
Date: Oct 01, 2017 6:05 pm Title: Chapter 16 - The Lair of the Ghost.
I know what I HOPE will happen next...
On a side note, how funny do you think a fic would be with B and J in a renovations situation a la the movie "The Money Pit"?
Not here, of course, as this is too good the way you are going.
But I will admit to this fic putting me in mind of how much I liked and laughed during that particular flick, as I've had many projects go hilariously wrong.
Like when the 120 year old, porcelain, claw footed, tub fell through my newly renovated dining room ceiling. ..
Oh the stories I could tell...
Saje
Author's Response:
Love that story idea! Go for it! (After TBP is done, of course). TAG
Date: Oct 01, 2017 5:51 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Mood Lighting
You are so welcome!
Love your electrician.
Where is Ghosty going to sleep, now that his room is all smoky and charred, hmmm?
Bet I know...
Saje
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2017 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 16 - The Lair of the Ghost.
The Ghost is clean. Now to learn why Justin was living in a crawly space and figure out how to keep him in his bed.
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2017 11:07 am Title: Chapter 16 - The Lair of the Ghost.
Is Justin going to tell his story through Brian's book?
Yes I'm looking forward to the continuation now that Justin is in Brian's bed, and his humor hahaha how much dicks you see = 2 !!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 01, 2017 4:54 am Title: Chapter 16 - The Lair of the Ghost.
The best part of this chapter was Howmany dicks do you see? And I love Justin's answer.Loooovinnnggg this
Date: Oct 01, 2017 3:04 am Title: Chapter 16 - The Lair of the Ghost.
I'm hoping he's going to be staying in Brian's bed. However, Justin probably thinks he needs to stay in that little space. He probably thinks it's all he deserves from all the abuse Craig put him through. I'm really hoping he confides in Brian & starts sharing his past with him. I can totally see the two of them waking up tangled in each other's arms.
Date: Oct 01, 2017 2:01 am Title: Chapter 16 - The Lair of the Ghost.
Oh, wow... this was just what I was hoping for - A better picture of what Justin had been enduring while hidden away in the house. Like Brian, I am curious as to why the locks were on the inside. Perhaps a way to keep Craig away? Or had Craig threatened to send Justin away, and Justin was protecting himself??? So many questions!
Is it too soon to ask for the next chapter, LOL!
Date: Oct 01, 2017 1:56 am Title: Chapter 16 - The Lair of the Ghost.
Maybe Justin will edit the new chapter of the novel, to add some details, clues...
Date: Sep 30, 2017 1:38 am Title: Chapter 15 - Mood Lighting
Ok, so I basically cried my way through this one... Justin has a lot of healing to do! The twist at the end with the dungeon was great, just what I needed at the end of such an intense chapter. Very curious if we'll get more details about what Justin's hidey-hole was really like... exactly what kind of conditions has he been living in all of this time?
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2017 3:07 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Mood Lighting
Omfg...that was one freaking awesome chapter...loved it..wow..splendid work.
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2017 11:26 am Title: Chapter 15 - Mood Lighting
OMG ! What happened to Justin ? I hope we'll know soon, but it seems something really bad with his father !
i lile Shanti ! Thank you for the update !
Date: Sep 29, 2017 2:11 am Title: Chapter 15 - Mood Lighting
Another wonderful chapter! So happy Justin wasn't hurt too badly and that Brian was able to rescue him. And the Dom electrician was a great twist! Love how she just took everything in stride. :)
Deb
Date: Sep 29, 2017 1:39 am Title: Chapter 14 - The Ice Breaker.
Such a sweet chapter. Of course Gus was able to get Justin to talk; how could he resist such a little heartbreaker? Wonderful chapter!
Deb
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2017 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Mood Lighting
There is no way that Brian's going to be able to sell that house. He's got too much invested in it. Time to hear the truth about why Justin is in hiding. Love the electrician!
Date: Sep 28, 2017 7:34 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Mood Lighting
Sweet Jesus, mother of God! What started the fire, Justin's kettle or the new kitchen lights? That poor thing! His little space is gone but that could only be a good thing so he'll have to take one fo Brian's guest rooms or maybe in with Brian himself...especially since he clearly has a head wound, he'll probably have to be watched.
So that shithead of a father called Justin bad, as well as many other things I'm sure...so he honestly thinks he's a bad person...omg verbal abuse can sometimes be worse than physical. Those scars are harder to heal....I'm glad Shanti was so cool with what happened. Thank goodness! The next chapter should be quite enlightening.
Date: Sep 28, 2017 7:02 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Mood Lighting
Ha ha ha, Brian and Justin as Dom/sub: I bet he didn't see that one coming!
Now that Justin's nest is out of order, where will Brian let him sleep, live?
Date: Sep 25, 2017 2:58 pm Title: Chapter 14 - The Ice Breaker.
Awwwww love love love this! Everything about this chapter was just what I needed, thanks TAG! So sweet and warm and family-oriented. Does Justin even have a bed for sheets? lol Brian should offer one of his guest bedrooms to him & does he know any physician's that would come out to his house to give Justin a once over? The poor thing must be dehydrated and malnutritioned. Gus is an excellent ice breaker, I love how easily he speaks to Gus, hopefully now he won't be so shy & silent around Brian.