[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2017 5:36 am Title: Chapter 20 - Welcome To The Ranks.
So like Michael. But Brian has his own entertainment at home and I'm hoping he'll keep the house once it's finished. There was just enough sex, but I'm still wondering what it was Justin did that's keeping him from leaving the house. Did he kill Craig? A great service to the community if he did.
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2017 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Phewwwwwwwwwwww!!! That shower scene was HOT *fans self*
But omg, my heart hurts for what Justin went through with Craig. I feel strangely proud of how he handled it all though, and how he opened up to Brian. He may not have been able to tell him those things face to face, so him having somewhere to write down what happened must have helped him. Brian hugging him at the end was so beautiful, yes, he may not be a huggy person, but they both needed that contact, they needed to know the other was okay, and that they had each other. Again, all stuff that can't be said (by Brian) with words.
Date: Oct 19, 2017 4:47 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Yeah, a shower scene!!! Damn hot!
We finally get some background from Justin: pretty disturbing, but Justin is healing. And he now knows that Brian won't throw him out.
Date: Oct 19, 2017 2:02 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Love all the backstory on Justin, it show us us a lot. I thought things were goiing to get more heated in the shower & afterwards too. I love the juice!!! More juice! Damn Real Life! It never stays at bay does it...hope you're okay TAG
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2017 11:44 am Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
That a great chapter TAG! Poor Justin what happen to him is horrible !
Thank you for the update !
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2017 2:31 am Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Damn, the thing is I can see this actually happening.
Author's Response:
Thank you. That's one of the best compliments ever to a writer of fiction. To be able to write something believable is our highest achievement. Thanks for reading. TAG
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Tag,
Poor Justin. At least now he has Brian.. You need to write more fast. This story is great.
~Lorie
Author's Response:
Thanks, Lorie. I have the entire rest of the story all written out in my head . . . now if I can just get a break from RL long enough to get it all down . . . TAG
Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Wow. Totally sad and believable.
Author's Response:
The 'believable' comment made my day. Thank you. That's what I always strive for. TAG
[Report This]Date: Oct 18, 2017 8:38 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Story Within A Story
Ah Great chapter, boys are getting closer and Justine is opening up. Next chapter please please. I enjoy this story
Author's Response:
If you could turn off Real Life for me for about a week, I could get this story wrapped up no problem. LOL. But, in the alternative, you'll have to bear with me while I try to find a few minutes a day to write in between RL crises. Sorry. TAG
Date: Oct 11, 2017 1:13 am Title: Chapter 18 - Coming Home
Not too surprised at Justin's confession about feeling guilty about the car accident. And I'm sure Craig took every opportunity to reinforce that guilt. Maybe Justin will feel a little better just sharing the story with someone.
I guess Justin was afraid a local plumber might recognize him...
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2017 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Coming Home
I am so fucking happy for Brian, it's like he's finally allowing himself to be happy - away from the lights and thumpa thumpa of Liberty Ave. He has no one to impress - and it suits him. I love how bashful Justin got at Brian's praise <3
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2017 11:59 am Title: Chapter 18 - Coming Home
Brian and his ghost are so confortable together and now we know why Justin is so scared !
Thank you TAG; more, more !
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2017 1:45 am Title: Chapter 18 - Coming Home
Tag,
Loved this.
Wondering why Justin was so concerned that the plumber might be someone he knows.
They are so sweet together, and Justin is helping Brian to relax and enjoy his life.
~Lorie
[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2017 12:48 am Title: Chapter 18 - Coming Home
Oh crap want more. luv this story
[Report This]Date: Oct 08, 2017 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Coming Home
The ghost and the plumber, what a thought! Now we know why Justin feels like he's a Bad Justin. That's something that won't change overnight.
Date: Oct 08, 2017 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Coming Home
Filler or not it was quite an enjoyable read as always.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I guess even filler can be fun sometimes. LOL. TAG
Date: Oct 08, 2017 9:02 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Coming Home
I understand filler, just thought we were going to get a little more action! Lol so cute Emmett looking over Brian's shoulder & being nosy about his blond boy. Wonder how that's gonna go over with the gang....hmmmmm At least Justin wasn't freaking out that the plumber would know him, thankfully he wasn't local. Too bad Brian had such a rough day with Ryder but I'm sure his Ghost could help him with that....
Date: Oct 08, 2017 8:53 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Coming Home
It's great that Justin is feeling comfortable enough to deal with the plumber.
I hope Mikey won't come unannounced in the coming weeks.
Thank you for the update!
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2017 11:15 am Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Great chapter! I love the morning scene.
What could be the horribly "bad" thing Justin did ?
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one !
Thank you TAG !
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2017 1:18 am Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Oh yeah this story is getting soooo good, can’t wait where you lead us...what could Justin have done that was so bad....or done TO him...hmmmm. Love Brian written like this... “Brian Kinney gives a shit!” ðŸ˜
looking forward to more, Erin
Date: Oct 04, 2017 12:10 am Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
Great chapter! Absolutely loved the morning wake-up scene... It's as if Justin had no issues or insecurities at all. Very clever the way Brian so gently got Justin to loosen up at dinner. But what could possibly be the horribly "bad" thing Justin did or thinks he did????
More please... and not just pie! ;-)
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Coming Out
NOOOOOOOOOOOO. I am all caught up. This reminds me of when I first found your stories and read 23 chapters in one night and was up until about 4 reading haha.
Oh man, they were SO close to getting it on, damn you, Shanti.
I loved Brian's "three" theories, it helped Justin relax a little, but when Brian hit the nail on the head, my heart broke. Just thinking about Justin being forced to live down there makes me wanna cry. And how he is going on and on about being bad :(
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 16 - The Lair of the Ghost.
My heart aches for Justin. I was worried for a second that Justin would be angry that Brian went down there, but he wasn't. I'm glad he's staying upstairs with Brian though, where he can be monitored and looked after. He deserves that, to have someone care for him :(
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Mood Lighting
LMAO omg first, I love that your electrician was a WOMAN, yesss! And secondly, I love that she thought Brian kept his boy in a dungeon. I so lol'd at her comment about not kink shaming.
But seriously, when the fire started I panicked, but Brian rushed down there as fast as he could and my heart just fell for him even more. That was so bloody cute. How he didn't even care that he could hurt himself,f, he just needed to make sure Justin was okay. And Justin not letting go, seriously, you're killing me, woman.
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2017 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 14 - The Ice Breaker.
I admit, I LOVE fluffy. And Gus calling Justin boy is so damn cute, and also, hilarious. Especially as Brian comments that he might not like it, but then goes on and keeps calling his ghost LMAO.
I hope Brian one day gets to see inside Justin's little hidey hole :(