Date: Dec 06, 2022 2:20 pm Title: Chapter 25
Great ending to a great story!!! I loved that Mel and Lindsay were on the good side of things this go round. Michael and Deb, though, wow. But I'm with Brian - at least Michael ended up with some jail time and didn't just get a slap on the wrist.
Date: Jan 11, 2021 4:33 am Title: Chapter 25
Another excellent story thank you
Date: Sep 23, 2019 5:21 am Title: Chapter 25
Beautiful story. I really loved how everyone saw the real Brian
Date: Mar 11, 2019 7:51 am Title: Chapter 25
Love this fic. Finished it in one sitting and is already missing these characters dearly.
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2018 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 25
I really enjoyed this story! Great ending even though I never wanted it to come ;) I loved that Brian was able to see everyone as they really were and so glad Micheal and David got jail time. This was so much fun to read- thanks so much for writing and sharing <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2018 9:02 am Title: Chapter 25
Brilliant work..loved it.
Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2018 4:20 am Title: Chapter 17
What did he said ?? Damnnn
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2018 4:11 am Title: Chapter 16
Mikey is pathetic.
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2018 5:05 pm Title: Chapter 13
Ever the romantic justin...cute.
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2018 2:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
The plot is thickening ...now the fun part will start.
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2018 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
Awww....sooo sweet was last part.
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2018 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Excellent story loving it.
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2017 8:44 am Title: Chapter 25
This story was too amazing to fully put into words. The characters were consistent and the story was perfectly balanced with plot and character development. I loved that Michael and David got a proper punishment for the fraud. It is a huge personal issue with me, and I hate people not getting punished for things like fraud and stealing, I was so mad at Brian when he didn’t want to try and get the money back from Michael originally, but I’m so pleased that you changed his mind, and the ending was excellent. This has been one of my most favourite stories, thank you so much for writing and sharing this :)
Date: Oct 17, 2017 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 25
A really great story. I loved it.
Date: Oct 17, 2017 12:03 pm Title: Chapter 24
I hope they get some time for this and not just probation.
Date: Oct 17, 2017 11:53 am Title: Chapter 23
At least the mother seems to want to clear it all up.
Date: Oct 17, 2017 11:35 am Title: Chapter 22
That sounds way more logical than David's story.
Date: Oct 17, 2017 9:51 am Title: Chapter 21
David's receptionist did it without him knowing? Somehow I can't believe that.
Date: Oct 17, 2017 9:41 am Title: Chapter 20
David is in on it? Wow, I never thought of him.
Date: Oct 17, 2017 8:33 am Title: Chapter 19
They are getting married. Yippee.
Date: Oct 17, 2017 8:23 am Title: Chapter 18
It's nice to get insight into all their relationships.
Date: Oct 17, 2017 8:14 am Title: Chapter 17
Oh I want to know what he said to Michael. It must have been good.
Date: Oct 17, 2017 8:08 am Title: Chapter 16
So Debbie is back blaming Brian for everything. I can't say I'm really surprised, just disappointed.
Date: Oct 17, 2017 8:00 am Title: Chapter 15
Cynthia's reaction is absolutely adorable.