Date: Jul 26, 2017 4:30 pm Title: Chapter 12
Blake and Michael: what an exchange! Blake really doesn't deal well with BS.
Great chapter!
Date: Jul 26, 2017 10:50 am Title: Chapter 12
I love that Gus is so comfortable with Jen. I know that is important to Brian and Justin. They are creating their family.
I wish I could have pushed Michael down the stairs. He's such a drama queen.
Go Blake! I love that he doesn't take any of Michael's shit.
Thanks for the update.

Date: Jul 26, 2017 4:03 am Title: Chapter 12
Michael was lucky someone just pushed him back because anyone else would've kicked his flat Ass And been ready for Deb too lol
I do wonder if he exaggerated the force to get Brian to be at his side at the hospital? (I wouldn't put it past him to pay someone to do it??)
Brian is really seeing Michael for the snake he is and he is not playing his game anymore.
Justin thinking Brian should use a burner phone for Michael and Deb to blow up with their incessant calling and texting is a good thing.
Brian was smart to get his key back from Michael and to put it on Justin's keyring.
Now cue Deb complaining that Brian wasn't at Michael's side after all they did for him. (Will it be only Deb or will they go for the gang up?)
Jennifer and Molly are crazy about Gus and they like Brian A Lot so they have two more people to add to their support system.

Date: Jul 26, 2017 12:37 am Title: Chapter 12
Happy Brian is seeing Michael for the pain in the butt he is. About time he fell down for real. I think Justin's idea of Brian throwing away his phone is spot on.
Date: Jul 26, 2017 12:29 am Title: Chapter 12
Loved this chapter. Not an inch did any of them give him. Bravo guys!
Justin's right about the phone.
I can finally review on this site, so look forward to them.
Date: Jul 23, 2017 3:50 pm Title: Chapter 11
I loved Drew when he goes "in your face"!
Date: Jul 23, 2017 9:56 am Title: Chapter 11
Deb is never going to learn. They all seem to be wasting their breath.
I'm glad Jen and Molly seem to be already accepting Brian. They are going to fall in love with Gus. Who wouldn't?
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica

Date: Jul 23, 2017 2:04 am Title: Chapter 11
Love how both Emmett and Drew laid it on the line for Deb. Shame she didn't take their advice seriously. Or did she. We'll find out if she tries to corner Ted. Now that's gonna be a chapter.
Date: Jul 19, 2017 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 10
I love the analysis from Blake; he is a great guy and a very good match for Ted.
Date: Jul 19, 2017 10:47 am Title: Chapter 10
I'm glad Justin is finally seeing why Brian kept so much of his life from him. They all are a piece of work.
Go Blake! I wish he had ordered hot soup. That would have been priceless.

Date: Jul 19, 2017 4:15 am Title: Chapter 10
Now that Blake and Ted have decided not to humor Michael, will Deb get in line? Love how you have Michael stopping his limp and expecting nobody to notice. As long as Brian has Justin things will be okay.

Date: Jul 15, 2017 3:23 pm Title: Chapter 9
Michael thinks he can bring Justin down, but you have to be intellegient to do that. Justin will beat Michael just with words alone.
Justin 1, Michael -689.
Date: Jul 15, 2017 11:55 am Title: Chapter 9
Excellent! The exchange bewteen Michael and Justin was delightful: one attacking and the other just sending the ball back.
Justin thinking about building a tricycle for Gus is just amazing.
Date: Jul 15, 2017 11:18 am Title: Chapter 8
It's so refreshing to have a story with Mel and Lindsay pro Brian/Justin.
I love the relationship Brian has with Cynthia as well as with Ted. Great job!

Date: Jul 15, 2017 11:11 am Title: Chapter 9
Pretentious Michael. Somehow thinking that he's important. Justin put him in his place and Brian is going to make sure Justin knows where his place is in Brian's life.
Date: Jul 15, 2017 10:18 am Title: Chapter 9
"Swish, swish, bich... another one in the basket." Good job Justin! He shut Mikey down well. Brian realizes who he lost and he is trying to change its beautiful. Mikey, you're gonna lose.
A custom tricycle, rich people are hysterical, lol.
Date: Jul 15, 2017 8:35 am Title: Chapter 9
Game. Set. Match. Goes to Justin! He really showed Michael how to play the game.
I'm glad the beginning of their couples night seemed to go well.
I loved that Justin is bonding with Gus.

Date: Jul 15, 2017 4:00 am Title: Chapter 9
It isn't hard to best Michael just look past him and when you talk to him just make it seem like everything he says has no real meaning.
Michael wants to see the effect he has to make you flinch but if you act like his little digs hurt as much as a mosquito bite then it will flip his little mind.
For every cut Michael tried to inflict on Justin he turned it around and made Michael bleed instead lol
Deb takes one step forward then thirty steps back because she still believes that Brian should put his life on hold for Michael even though he lied about how injured he is.
Michael has now run to Mommy to get Brian to heel hopefully Brian will stand up and tell Deb what he thinks and feels about them abusing his trust, friendship and feeling before he ultimately kicks her to the same curb Michael will be residing on.
Jennifer and Molly are going to enjoy seeing Brian and Justin together :)
Date: Jul 14, 2017 10:24 am Title: Chapter 8
I'm so glad they both seem to be on the same page now. Who knew Mel and Lindsay could actually want Brian to be happy? I like them in this story.
Can't wait to see what happens next.

Date: Jul 14, 2017 2:06 am Title: Chapter 8
I hope Michael heard Justin and Partner that way his pea brain can explode.
Gus waited to walk for his Daddy and that was a great thing to share with Justin, Mel, Lindsay and Lee.
Brian and Justin are making strives to be honest and upfront with each which is good because Michael is going to do his worst to break them up.
Won't be hard for Justin and Lindsay to tie Michael in knots all they have to do is use big words, don't yell and smile while insulting him.
Michael will be scratching his Ass trying to figure out what part was insulting lol
So what stupid thing will Michael do to Justin at Babylon?? (Bet he heard Brian and Babylon?)

Date: Jul 14, 2017 1:59 am Title: Chapter 8
Okay, I'm glad to see that Lindsay and Mel aren't on side Michael. And that Kinnetic has a chance to get the MacTaylor account. Not that I'm surprised. Why did Michael leave? Could it be that he heard what Brian said?

Date: Jul 13, 2017 3:29 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! I'm sooo in love with this story. Drooling for next chapter.
Date: Jul 13, 2017 12:43 am Title: Chapter 7
Mikey just give up. You have no idea what you're up against. You can't stop a tidal wave.
Date: Jul 12, 2017 5:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
Slow but sure wins the race. Hopefully B&J still to the agreement that they both open up more to each other. Will mke for a stronger realtionship.
Really happy to see Mel's change of heart. Lindsey's support of them is good too. I think B&J are going to need all the help they can get! Especially with Michael's machinations.
Michael seems to have gone to great lengths to get what he wants. He's going to learn that no matter what he tries to do, it will never happen. Very unnerved about his comment, "after everything he'd done". what legths has he actually gone to? He's obviously fine, just playing it up to get sympathy. It's going to bit him in teh ass soon! Can't wait!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jul 12, 2017 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 7
Next chapter will be rocky with Michael, but Justin will meet Gus; that should be a great part.