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Reviewer: Keykoles77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2018 5:12 am Title: Chapter 8 - Say Ahhhh

Thanks for the link to the montage, it was fantastic. I also can never get enough of Malik he is just too adorable!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the montage - it's a good one, right? And, Mal . . . well, I just can't let that character go. *drools* TAG

Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2018 12:09 am Title: Chapter 8 - Say Ahhhh

Yeh right Brian doesn't do jealousy LOL

Author's Response:

Shhhh! Don't tell anyone... LOL! TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2018 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Say Ahhhh

What can I say.  This fantasy was first rate.  Loved the chat room, you'd almost think you were working from real life with that.  Enjoyed the return of Malik.  Can't wait to find out what sort of hobbies you have planned.



Author's Response:

We went all-out Meta in this chapter. LOL. But what's life if you can't make fun of yourselves a little, huh? Glad you enjoyed it - and the return of our lovely Malik. TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2018 8:39 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Say Ahhhh

Omg yeah, my panties were all puddles! Hot hot hot! Oooooh love me some jelly Brian! Cannot wait for the boys to get busy off stage in private....hopefully Brian wil let him top him! Will that happen soon? 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed your chapter. Feel free to make more suggestions! TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 14, 2018 3:34 am Title: Chapter 7 - Weird Science

What a hot nerdy professor!

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 09, 2018 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Weird Science

Justin in control is hot. Brian giving in to what he's feeling is hotter.

Daph pushing him to bottom just may have her looking for someone else. He'll only do that, with Justin, in the privacy of his bedroom.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2018 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Weird Science

The chemestry was perfect and Eureka1 is aces in my books.  This just keeps heating up.  Have you done firemen yet?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2018 9:27 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Good Cock, Bad Cock

I like how Brian turned the script around and saved the day.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2018 7:17 am Title: Chapter 7 - Weird Science

OMG! I know I haven't reviewed before but this is just too hot to stop! As soon as I finish one chapter I need to get to the next chapter to see what scenario has been planned for our favorite pair! Keep it coming ladies!

Deb

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2018 2:06 am Title: Chapter 7 - Weird Science

Your writing is amazing.  Wow, you make Brian & Justin even hotter than usual.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2018 1:08 am Title: Chapter 7 - Weird Science

Loved the premise. So much fun, I kinda wish Justin would rim Brian though, I bet that would,surprise him! Lol

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2018 3:52 am Title: Chapter 6 - Good Cock, Bad Cock

Hot, corny, funny, excellent! Thor is a good addition and Justin didn't let Daohne force him, thanks to the sex on legs cop.



Author's Response:

Quoting Saje here - "Who says porn can't be funny?" LOL. We had a great time writing it at least. TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2018 8:47 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Justin And The King.

What a hot raunchy ending!!! I love how Daphne was fanning herself and Ted was thinking big bucks.



Author's Response:

I think we managed to keep them pretty much in character, don't you? LOL. TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2018 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Good Cock, Bad Cock

Love sexy cop Brian! I have an idea...how about sexy doctor Brian & his male nurse Thor examining patient Justin and his prostate? Or maybe a backyard bbq, complete with kiss the cook or cock apron. 

Please tell me Justin will top Brian sometime? 



Author's Response:

Oh, my! I like the ‘playing doctor’ idea! We’ll add that to the list. And, of course Justin will top . . . Eventually. Poor Brian needs to work up to the idea, though! Lolololol! Glad you’re enjoying the story! TAG

Reviewer: mamaduck Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2017 2:48 am Title: Chapter 5 - Justin And The King.

Ok I figured out who most are.

HOT! HOT! HOT!



Author's Response:

It was so fun writing that chapter and letting so many of our readers & friends have cameos! Glad you enjoyed the hottness too. TAG

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2017 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Justin And The King.

DAMMMMNNNNNNN!!!! If Ted and Daphne thinks to edit any part of that scene, write me into the story so I can choke them! Good Gravy Daddy's baby that was smoking HOT! Where the hell is my drink and pack of cigarettes?! F*ck the cold shower! I'll happily burn for another incendiary scene like that!

Great job!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Chelle 

Reviewer: Tena Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2017 9:21 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Justin And The King.

*THUD*



Author's Response:

I hope that's a good 'thud' - as in I was blown away 'thud' - not as in I hated it, thud. LOL. TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2017 9:21 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Justin And The King.

Love Daphne talking to her cohorts, but the best is when the acting isn't acting at all.



Author's Response:

My fave part too! LOL. TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2017 8:53 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Justin And The King.

Absolutely love the chat scene and yes bring on more! I know who I am of course, OreoCookie & SnowySunshine but that's it...you're gonna have to make a diagram of some sort, please...lol

The sex scene...as always, hot hot hot!!! Kudos Saje! Girl you are smokin'! 



Author's Response:

I had so much fun writing the chat scene. We'll definitely do more of that later. It'll be like a game to try to figure out who everyone is. As for the sex scene - it was smoking, wasn't it? So fun! Thanks for reading, Shine! TAG (aka You'reIt)

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2017 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Getting To Know You.

Ha ha ha, Daphne in the backroom! How could she get in?

I bet she will have so many stories to tell after that trip in fuckland...

Brian better be prepared to be topped in the coming weeks: what happened in the backroom didn't get unnoticed by his favorite writer!

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 21, 2017 12:20 am Title: Chapter 4 - Getting To Know You.

Love that Justin had to teach Brian how to waltz! I would've liked to see that on the show. And then Babylon...hot hot hot! Daphne learned a lot huh? lol I bet she needed a cigarette! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 20, 2017 9:49 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Getting To Know You.

And they didn't earn a single cent from all that sex.  Shame nobody had a camera.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2017 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Easy Rider.

Another hot chapter! Another hilarious porn name "Thor Hammerthruster"!

Brian being jealous is preparing some funny scenes in the future.

Great idea to call it "Easy rider"; it could have been "The wild one" as Brandon is one of Brian's hero.

Between the porn names and the chapters' title, your minds are on overdrive.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 13, 2017 5:01 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Bronc Busting

Whoa!! Hot!

I would love to read the comments from Daphne and Ted about what just happened.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 12, 2017 7:46 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Easy Rider.

Nicely done combination of ideas.  Great job.

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