Date: May 26, 2017 4:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Amazing chapter!!!
Some other sad facts about Justin's life, but it seems it's improving fast!
The baby will help Gus to move forward and so will Brian; especially when he will discover Justin might be the artist who will decorate his office; wild guess, but will see if I'm right later on.
Ian was out fast and allowed THE meeting that will change some lives.
Brian is amazing in this story.
Date: May 26, 2017 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh see, told ya Gus it's already better. You gave a new baby, that's huge for a trip to the parkl. Brian being assertive awesome, Justin needed to be rescued and with Brian's past it might not have happened. This is going to be wonderful!
Poor dead Jen. Molly, I didn't really know.
Date: May 26, 2017 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is horrible awful, terrible sad and dud I say horrible? That goodness these poor people gave each other. Suffering alone, is double the pain. Together they can find strength they never knew. Poor Gus, hang in sweetie, I know it gets better.
So happy, Michael knows the inside of a jail intimately..
Thanks for the newest story. :)
Date: May 26, 2017 10:23 am Title: Chapter 2
I don't even know what to say. That chapter was just so damn sweet. I'm hoping our guys get more comfortable with each other because it looks like Gus is already attached to Lily and Justin.
Date: May 26, 2017 6:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh wauww wonderful.
Date: May 26, 2017 3:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Interesting, very interesting.
Date: May 26, 2017 1:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Your stories just pull me right in! Love this! Well done, can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2017 12:45 am Title: Chapter 2
Love this. Brian, Gus, Emmett and Ted caring for someone. Perfect.
Date: May 26, 2017 12:25 am Title: Chapter 2
Ooohhh!!! How sweet. ETHAN!!! Why Ethan?
Date: May 26, 2017 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Another beginning to another FABULOUS fic!
Love your writing talent, esp. anti- Mikey, Linz, Deb and Mel.
Thanks for sharing!
JoAnn
Date: May 25, 2017 9:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for more..... â¤ï¸
Date: May 25, 2017 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a punch in the guts! Very dark beginning, but I'm hooked already.
I hope Brian will be able to get his money back from the girls; he doesn't care that much about it, but they care and will fight not to give it back. He should make them bleed.
As for Ted, it's horrible what Michael did; I hope he won't get away with it.
Date: May 25, 2017 6:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a terrific start! I can tell I'll be checking throughout the day for updates. lol. I can already tell that it's going to be a very emotionally involved story. They are already all over the map and it's just the first chapter.
Utter fury and disgust for how the girls have treated Gus. How are they even able to try to fight to regain custody of Gus? How are not in jail for neglect? IS Mel still practising law?
I icked at the idea of Ted and Michael having been together. Ugh...and what an absolute heartless freaking asshole Michael is in this. And Deb is right in there too sadly enough.
Thank goodness Emmett saw what was actually happening with Gus which led to Brian now having him. Now that Ted, Emmett and Brian will be taking Gus with them and startingfresh in New York, hopefully they will be able to at least start to put some of this behind them. Start fresh without those awful 4 hindering all their efforts. The support and belief in Brian's ability from T&E is lovely! both willing to put up $ for his own business.
Intersting that Joan is now involved in a positive way. I like that. she was too late to help brian gorwingup, but she's saving her grandkids. Jack and Claire...well just disgusting!
Seems like neither Lindsey nor Michael are on a "I want Brian for myself" kick. All 4 seem to really hate him.
Fantastic start!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: May 25, 2017 5:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Definitely want more of this.
Date: May 25, 2017 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! What a beginning. I'm hooked already. Great story idea.
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2017 9:28 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!!!
WOW this is something that made me cry like a baby....
Hope this is going to be updated often 'cause I can't wait to read more
Date: May 25, 2017 5:20 am Title: Chapter 1
This has me on the edge of my seat. Great 1st chapter. Just wow!
[Report This]Date: May 25, 2017 2:12 am Title: Chapter 1
What a fantastic beginning to a new story. I love that Emmett was the one to bring Gus to Brian's attention. And that John called Brian when Peter was being beaten. Can't wait to see what you have planned.
Date: May 25, 2017 2:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, what she (Nichelle) said ðŸ˜
Date: May 25, 2017 1:52 am Title: Chapter 1
WOW! What an opening! I'm really looking forward to this. So many surprises already occurred during this first chapter. Ted dated Michael??!! The strange part is that if Ted had gotten his wish in the series, I believe that somewhere along the way, Michael would have destroyed him. If not with other men then the eternal whine would make Ted look for any way out that he could find. It's sad but I hope that he's healing and will find a love worthy of him!
As for Brian, I'm sitting here rocking, singing Negro sprituals again trying to contain my anger at the Fucked-up Foursome! Mel, Lindsay, Deb and Dumbass really need their asses whipped...SMH! It's sad to think that Brian went from living with a psychopath to attracting Sociopaths. Mel is also one by default. Although Brian can't recoup the money through the courts, hopefully he will sue their asses privately, showing all the stubs that were supposed to go for Gus' support. I'm sure that a great shark lawyer will happily subpoena bank records and receipts. With their parental rights revoked due to neglect, proof that they didn't spend Brian's financial contribution as intended won't be hard to get.
Such a great beginning to this story! I'm already pissed off! LOL
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle