Date: Jun 03, 2017 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
Brian's revelation started to corner Justin a little, but they will work something that will suit them both. Gus will be thrilled when he will know that Lily is her half-sister.
Date: Jun 03, 2017 10:38 am Title: Chapter 10
Let's start with Vic, Brian has every right to feel disappointed with Vic. Vic should feel ashamed, like Ivanka, he's complicit, lol. But, sense he didn't help jus chances for change are greater.
Little Lilly, so lucky, Gus is going to be an awesome big brother. I'm not sure how Justin will react. Fate, luck, the gods or stupid Cupid has set these wheels in motion. If they can make it through the bumps we are that much better.
Date: Jun 02, 2017 7:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
Awwwww so sweet! Gus promised her only good things...
I want to know what else Brian's 'application' for his sperm said...lol
Date: Jun 02, 2017 4:02 pm Title: Chapter 10
Brian must find the way to tell Justin, without him feeling trapped. Even if they are good in this new family, the responsibilities will automatically change.
Date: Jun 02, 2017 10:25 am Title: Chapter 10
I do hope Brian tells Justin soon and I hope he's happy about it. I so want them to become a real family. Emmett might be getting a bit suspicous.
I love how protective Gus is of Lily.
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2017 5:10 am Title: Chapter 10
Brian knows! So cool. Can't wait for everyone to find out. And I'm hoping that Ted decides he wants more from life than what Michael offered.
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2017 5:09 am Title: Chapter 10
Forgiveness will come but first Vic has to forgive himself for allowing it to go on for so, they all do in a way, until they are ready to forgive themselves they won't be strong enough to face their bullies head on and walk away victorious instead of victims.
They must all need money that is why they are plotting so hard, perhaps Liberty Avenue turned on them all?
Seems Brian is starting to regain his determination to fight for what he wants and first it starts with protecting his children, Justin and and friends.
Date: Jun 02, 2017 12:39 am Title: Chapter 9
Justin had Brian's baby!! That's why he said the baby looked like him. Oh riots a wonderful serendipitous situation. Yay!!! Lindsay grabbing the sperm would have been very very bad.
Date: Jun 02, 2017 12:37 am Title: Chapter 8
Poor Ted, testifying cleanses the soul. You will come out the other side dear. Justin has an instant family, lol. Brian and Gus have a crush. The Pitts crew sucks butt, majorly.
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2017 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
Nice some intrigue about Brian's sperm donation and I really hope Lily is his.
So how long before Vic shows up to join his boys?
Alex calling Ms. Novotny Debra makes a lot of sense why give her credit for anything, Brian succeeded despite Debra and so did Ted, I don't even think calling her or Michael Novotny is good either.
That name belongs to a man who sacrifice his life for his country, Debra stole the name to hide the fact that she got pregnant at 17 and was unwed.
Neither she or Michael deserve to use that name anymore it has been tarnished long enough.
Seems Ted is getting getting stronger mentally aswell as physically.
Jealous Brian is So Adorable;)
Date: Jun 01, 2017 9:42 pm Title: Chapter 9
So Lily could be Brian's afterall...pretty please. lol
I hope Vic comes to live with the guys. :)
Date: Jun 01, 2017 6:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
Justin might have bought Brian's sample? That would be a huge coincidence!
Glad Emmett sent this text to Vic; maybe it will help him get away from the devils he has near him.
Date: Jun 01, 2017 6:21 pm Title: Chapter 9
My tummy is upended. Feeling positively ill. Michael and Deb here are positively vile! Heart breaks for Ted, Emmett & Brian. To be si disillusioned by people you thought cared.
Oh I hope Vic just keeps on walking!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Justin got Brian's sample didn't he?!?!? Holy shitballs! Oh man...that would be EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *fingers crossed* Oh please oh please oh please please please!!
More insight into the evil people. How disgustingly aweful they are. Love Alex in this. Wonderful portrayal.
Cheers
Elaine
Date: Jun 01, 2017 3:17 pm Title: Chapter 9
So...something tells me that Brian is going to turn out to be Lily's dad...nice touch!
Already Brian is showing some jealous tendencies towards Alex paying attention & having some kind words for Justin...hmmmmm
[Report This]Date: Jun 01, 2017 11:55 am Title: Chapter 9
Is it possible that Brian is Lily's father? That would be so cool. Here's hoping Vic turns up to join the family.
Date: May 31, 2017 5:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
Beautiful (the way this new family is slowly building) and painful (Ted's confession) chapter!
Date: May 31, 2017 2:23 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awwwww Brian & Justin...so sweet
Poor Ted...at least he's getting better
Date: May 31, 2017 10:09 am Title: Chapter 8
I'm so proud of Ted. I know that was a big step for him.
I love how they all have become an instant family. I can't wait for Brian and Justin to spend some more time together.
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2017 3:33 am Title: Chapter 8
Ted is starting to see how Important he really is to not only Emmett but Brian too and that Michael never really cared and his using him to get near Brian.
Justin sees Brian as the kind of father he should strive to be for Lily.
Perhaps Brian with Alex's help is slowly getting his army ready to slay a few dragons in Pittsburgh?
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2017 3:29 am Title: Chapter 8
I am so loving this story. Especially how they come together to help each other.
[Report This]Date: May 31, 2017 12:25 am Title: Chapter 7
Alex being the focus of this chapter is a good thing it shows as the outsider he saw through Debra, Michael, Lindsay and Mel for the cruel heartless people they really are.
The court cases were interesting because it should the lengths they were willing to go to win and keep Brian focused on them.
Loved when Mel made an idiot of herself and showed her true colors, I do wonder how everyone on Liberty Avenue felt after they heard?
How did Melanie's law firm feel about her testimony?
And what did Mommy and Daddy do when they heard?
Justin and Lily may be the healing balm this family needs to grow stronger and move on.
Date: May 30, 2017 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
So happy Alex felt he had to stay with Brian and Ted for their therapy.
This new family is like a rebirth for all of them, but I feel that the road is going to be bumpy; the old family won't let them go this easily.
Date: May 30, 2017 11:42 am Title: Chapter 7
What great back story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: May 30, 2017 11:19 am Title: Chapter 7
Having Alex give the history was a good choice. The exposition versus the scenes keeps the focus on the happier part of the story. A very sad chapter ended with a hopeful thought, very nice authoress! im just worried about the showdown, but not really. We will win, I would rather miss the pain. The Pitts crew is the pits.
Date: May 30, 2017 10:29 am Title: Chapter 7
I'm not sure who I hate more in that foursome, Deb, Michael, Lindsay, or Mel.
My heart continues to break for Gus. He has been through so much in his short life. I do hope his new family will help him to understand that he is safe and can relax some.