Date: Dec 24, 2021 6:40 pm Title: Rage-Ing and the Thumbsucker Proxy
I swear this is the one time I just said, no Justin don't. Let Ruth have the peace she had when she carried the girls. Oh and I think I am on my fifth or sixth reading of this one.
Date: Nov 01, 2021 7:26 pm Title: ...Of The End
This was great!! I loved seeing Michael and Lindsay get the book thrown at them for all they had done!!! They deserved that and more!!
Date: Apr 29, 2020 12:10 am Title: ...Of The End
read it again
Date: Jan 01, 2020 4:15 am Title: Milking It
Gus is going on my nerves.. Bossy little brad
Date: Dec 19, 2019 3:32 am Title: The Weekend of Revelations
great chapter. Michael and Lindsay really don't have a clue Glad that Gus got to spend the weekend with the people he liked.
Date: Dec 19, 2019 3:10 am Title: Two Slaps and Emmy Gets a Tickle
the picture of Lindsay in grease had me lol rolling on the floor. Loving all of it
Date: Dec 19, 2019 2:56 am Title: Impatience, Nerves, Envy and Rage
Great chapter- but I think Mel would try to insist that Brian and Justin have a little more decorum. Practically doing during the parental meeting is a bit much. I think that Brian would be okay doing a little teasing, but more should be held till later. Sure, he is pissing Mikey and LInds off, but by paying attention, they can't get on his case even more about his priority isn't Gus but getting off.





Date: Aug 11, 2019 11:39 pm Title: Lindsay Gets Caught Bullshitting and Michael Admitting
Love Ginny going after Michael and Mel being held up on the drag queens shoulder. That would be a picture. Lol And totally adore Debs.





Date: Aug 11, 2019 6:23 am Title: Rules, Harsh Reality...and This is About You!
You and your words? Terms? Lmao cindernever and crumpledforeskin. Love them. And rubbing Gus’ hand to put him to sleep. Such an easy to picture scene. 💞





Date: Jul 26, 2019 9:12 am Title: Hunter-ing and Gathering
I was looking for something to read around midnight.. or a little later than that. Anyways, I saw the Rage Unleashed and read the first chapter. Interesting... anyway, then I noticed it was part of this series. I looked at the story, I remembered starting it one time, but I did not get very far in to it. That was eveident with this chapter. And for the life of me, I'm not sure why I never finished reading it!
All I can say, is I'm LOVING it!!! YES! Jen got to punch Michael. Debbie has changed her locks, and Michael is going to be locked out of HUNTER"S house!!!
Lady, you are EVIL!!! I LOVE YOU!!! Wherever will he lay his head?
I have to wonder how long before Mel follows suit. I DO hope she holds all the cards (mortgage, car, etc.) and money in the household. Because I have a feeling after the olive branch Mel extended, Brian will side with her.
GREAT STORY!!!
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 06, 2019 1:00 am Title: ...Of The End
did read it again, loved it
Date: Oct 16, 2018 5:29 pm Title: ...Of The End
Just lovd the story, had to laugh so hard sometimes I almost wet myself.
Date: Oct 16, 2018 7:53 am Title: Comfort and Joy - Part 2
I would not allow Lindey near the children
Date: Oct 15, 2018 12:16 pm Title: The Past is the Past The Time is Now
Just love it
Date: Oct 15, 2018 6:25 am Title: Talking to Brian...Mel and About Brian...Ben
Love Ruth, too funny. Never liked Linsey
Date: Dec 03, 2017 9:28 pm Title: ...Of The End
I finished reading this story on the date it was complete, but could not review then as I messed up my penname. It is ok now and I just had to tell you how much I loved this story from beginning to end. Your imagination is amazing and it truly shows in your writing. All of the stories you have written I have really enjoyed. Keep up the good work. IF you write I will read. Thank you.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 7:29 pm Title: ...Of The End
This was a great story. I really enjoyed it.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 4:25 pm Title: ...Paves the Way to the Beginning...
She wanted to kill him? I didn't expect that.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 3:34 pm Title: Stupidity and Arrogance...
I was really afraid Lindsay would find a way to talk herself out of it. Apparently you had other plans.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 2:55 pm Title: Back to Normality, Reality Bites...and Going Ridin'
This is sooo good. I love it.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 11:46 am Title: And They Make Their Move
Finally. I wish they would go away for a really long time.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 11:11 am Title: The Premiere
I hope they will get them soon.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 10:58 am Title: The Takedown, Part I and Getting Buggy
Can't they let Ruth have a little alone time with these two? That would be fun.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 10:31 am Title: Little Mr Big Mouth Talks...then Walks
Good for Hobbs. At least he is trying to do the right think, even if it's only because he doesn't want to go to jail.
Date: Nov 17, 2017 10:22 am Title: Contact in Babylon...and Eating Eggs in the Diner
Why would they notice a cab driver. They are way to entitled for that.