
Date: Jun 10, 2017 2:16 pm Title: Captain Oh My Captain!
Poor mikey...rofl..😃😂

Date: Jun 10, 2017 2:00 pm Title: Rhubarb, Gus and Brian
Wow...they met...yuppy..lols.

Date: Jun 10, 2017 1:42 pm Title: And We're Off and it's Definitely...We!
Omg...this is soo interesting..i love it.

Date: Jun 10, 2017 1:17 pm Title: Plans are Afoot
Amazing start...although someone is missing...lets see where he is..??? awesome story line...thank u for the great work.

Date: Jun 10, 2017 2:04 am Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read
Why is Sam in Pittsburgh and why is he helping Lindsay he isn't the fatherly type?
So Lindsay and Michael have to pay Mel child support? That Is Perfect!!! lol
I get the feeling Sam is going to wish he stayed in Italy with his latest muse?
Is there a clause in the papers Ray signed that say if he does anything against his family he will be prosecuted or lose the six million he has now?
Does Ray running to Vance have something to do with the emails?

Date: Jun 09, 2017 4:54 pm Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read
Well Ray like Michael and Lindsay got his entitled Ass handed to him first by his family then by his lover who was just using him.
Instead of groveling back to his family and trying to repair the damage he goes for revenge <smh>
The little entitled Prince is about to learn that he really shouldn't cross his family or Brian because the payback will reverberate for decades.
Date: Jun 09, 2017 10:22 am Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read
Ouch, payback is a bitch!
Date: Jun 09, 2017 6:49 am Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read
Wow. That was a kick in the teeth.
Date: Jun 09, 2017 6:28 am Title: Someone is Deluded and the Rolling Stone Earworm
I could imagine the scene, if it was anything like when he tried to build Gus' swing set: Brian and the baby seat/carrier: there was a lot of fudgnucking and fudgsicles said
This is hilarious: bottom burps.
And that, it's only another face of jealous Brian: “Which reminds me... the moment she hits 11, I’m buying a shotgun!”

Date: Jun 09, 2017 6:06 am Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read
Little Ruby is well loved. Ray blew it and now he intends to start trouble. Somehow I don't think it will work. At least he won't have Ethan eating up what little he has.

Date: Jun 09, 2017 5:27 am Title: Sam's Back in Town and Ray Fails to Follow Through and Read
Doesn't Ray realize that Franc is going to hand him his balls literally for calling Gardner.
Ethan was smart at least to get off the sinking ship that is known as Ray's life.

Date: Jun 08, 2017 6:41 pm Title: Someone is Deluded and the Rolling Stone Earworm
So who was Sam with that has him stringing Lindsay along and is Sam really coming to Pittsburgh to use France who I think would be happy to see him just to knock him on his Ass??!
Might have to come up with a new category for Gus who just gets more adorable each chapter.
Love that Justin is going to draw on Gus's wall at home and that they can redo the house with what they want.
So does Lindsay think Hell Has Frozen Over or will she continue to wait for the lawyer to call her back??

Date: Jun 08, 2017 5:08 pm Title: Someone is Deluded and the Rolling Stone Earworm
So much fun in this chapter. I'm surprised that Sam hasn't tossed Lindsay aside yet. Or maybe he has and she doesn't know it?
Date: Jun 07, 2017 9:10 pm Title: Listen You Might Not Learn But You Must Listen
Lindsey can threaten all she wants, she doesn't live with Sam and I guess he would have to come to the US to adopt the kids; I bet he doesn't want anything to do with children, so, lets see how she will manage that.

Date: Jun 07, 2017 5:34 pm Title: Listen You Might Not Learn But You Must Listen
I love the fact that Franc is going to own the comic book store if we wait long enough I bet Michael's head might actually explode lol
It seems Franc knows more about Lindsay than Lindsay I can't wait to find out what she is going to do to Lindsay with the inflammation she has and what the information is?
Does Franc actually know who Sam is spending time with now?
And how much money did Sam send Lindsay cause she is going through it quickly???
Date: Jun 07, 2017 4:14 pm Title: Listen You Might Not Learn But You Must Listen
Yeah! Linday bashing! Yippee! Next up: Mikey!
Nice chapter!

Date: Jun 07, 2017 1:48 pm Title: Listen You Might Not Learn But You Must Listen
Lindsay and Michael have met their match in Franc. Love the idea of her buying the comic store and letting Justin teach classes.

Date: Jun 06, 2017 3:19 pm Title: The Story of Lindsay and the Stupidity of Michael
Glad that Ruby is getting stronger and that Justin got to meet her thanks to Gus who gets more adorable as the story progresses.
So Lindsay is going to jail?...About Damn Time!!!
Michael must be high if he thinks Brian is going to sell him Red Cape Comics if he knew how to run the place like a business then he wouldn't need a loan from Brian all the time.
Nathan is being smart and doing what he can to bring in New business and all Michael wants to do is horde everything so he can stay 14 forever.
Deb is realizing that her way of dealing with people is not going to fly around Franc and that Brian's home is not the diner so she will be called out.
I seriously can't wait for the next update :)

Date: Jun 06, 2017 2:35 pm Title: The Story of Lindsay and the Stupidity of Michael
All I can say about Gus is Awww....
He's going to be a great big brother.

Date: Jun 06, 2017 11:29 am Title: The Story of Lindsay and the Stupidity of Michael
Gus is so sweet about all this and more than happy to include Papa Justin. Rhubarb misses Gus. Michael is being a pill and actually thinks that Deb is going to help him buy the comic store from Kinnetic? I hope not.
Date: Jun 06, 2017 9:08 am Title: The Story of Lindsay and the Stupidity of Michael
That was supper sweet.
Date: Jun 06, 2017 7:17 am Title: The Story of Lindsay and the Stupidity of Michael
So emotional! Gus is really a great kid/brother.
Date: Jun 05, 2017 8:33 pm Title: Here Comes The Big Brother
Heart is bursting! Welcome to the world little Ruby. Scared shitless for a moment there, but all is well for our little family. Gus is so excited. What a little trooper he is. So thrilled to have a little sister. So intuned to everyone around him. he sure loves them all.
Cheering on Franc! YES!! She let everyone, especially Deb know what they were doing. I understand Brian more as he was probably still in a bit of shock, but Deb is a bit like a bull in a china shop. She means well, but tends to get a bit high handed thinking she knows all and should know 1st. I'm sure Franc put her enough in her place that she'll remember going forward. she's not malicious in any way, just...a busy body. lol
Sorry I've been a bit lax in my reviews. I have read and loved every one of them. I'll try to do better.
cheers,
Elaine
Date: Jun 05, 2017 1:45 pm Title: Here Comes The Big Brother
OMG, I would have been so scared too being Brian, Mel, Justin or Leda (or Gus too)... so glad Ruby is here and ok..
Glad Franc let Deb know how she treats people... I agree she was just caught up in the stress, tension and then excitement, but it gets to be a bit much... and SOOO glad that Brian shared Ruby's name with Justin before anyone else knows it! <3
Date: Jun 05, 2017 5:15 am Title: Here Comes The Big Brother
Yeah, Bumpy is out and going almost well! Gus is too cute and adorable. Glad that Deb was stopped in her way to control everybody. She's not at the diner.