[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2017 9:13 pm Title: Party Prep
I am still so loving this. Waiting to see what you have your sleeve w/David LOL
Date: Aug 07, 2017 5:19 pm Title: Party Prep
David can be sneaky too, but it's for a good cause: his mental health!
Gus will be over the moon to have such a great venue for his birthday. I hope Grady won't be too much trouble.
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoy the next chapter...it's Michael at his very best!
MissMerlot
Date: Aug 07, 2017 5:05 pm Title: So What We're Going to Do it This...
Oh, how Gus is adorable! I can't get enough of him! He is so sweet, polite, considerate and he so loves his daddies.
I love these quotes:
- "the Non-marvellous Marvel borathon is boring to us"
- "He looks so innocent. But my ass knows differently!"
You will need to tell us which book they are "reading"!
Author's Response:
The book is the one that Brian got for Justin's birthday...sex positions. Brian get his own special present for his birthday...
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Aug 07, 2017 4:35 pm Title: Party Prep
Can't wait to see the party!
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2017 12:34 pm Title: Party Prep
Gus' birthday is going to be terrific. Even Grady is coming. Love the Golden Girls. Will Ray be around for the party? Thank you for two chapters. I've missed your stories and I'll have an extra nice time today.
[Report This]Date: Aug 07, 2017 12:24 pm Title: So What We're Going to Do it This...
I'm wondering if the sex with Michael worth it for David? Michael only thinks of Michael. I also wonder if Michael was on Gus' list to invite to his party? Love this chapter.
Date: Aug 07, 2017 10:42 am Title: Party Prep
George and Randolph are such adorable matchmakers. Can't wait for the double birthday party.
Brian definitely better watch out. Justin is plotting his revenge.
Date: Aug 07, 2017 10:34 am Title: So What We're Going to Do it This...
Gus is too cute! He's so excited about his party.
I love the Golden Girls. I'm definitely Dorothy.
Author's Response:
Me too! The times I've got my Dorothy on or if I'm really peeved, I channel Hannibal Lecter.
Happy reading
MissMerlot
Date: Aug 07, 2017 7:33 am Title: Party Prep
So sweet. Good for David.
Date: Aug 05, 2017 4:36 am Title: Pushing Back, Getting Comfy and Party Planning
The striptease was so "inciting" that Brian couldn't talk anymore!
George and Randolph are plotting like kids.
I love how you "torture" David: poor guy!
[Report This]Date: Aug 05, 2017 12:00 am Title: Pushing Back, Getting Comfy and Party Planning
George and Randolph are very devious but hopefully their plan will result in David finding happiness and Michael getting humiliated in front of everyone.
Michael needs to face reality and see that he will never win against Justin and continuing to try just makes him look more childish.
Love the strip tease it was Hoottttt!!!!
:)
Date: Aug 04, 2017 7:28 pm Title: Pushing Back, Getting Comfy and Party Planning
Now these men know how to scheme .
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2017 12:45 pm Title: Pushing Back, Getting Comfy and Party Planning
OMG! Michael is in a pickle and doesn't even know it. I like Andrew for David, hell I like David. The next chapter should be so delightful.
Date: Aug 04, 2017 10:36 am Title: Pushing Back, Getting Comfy and Party Planning
George and Randolph are very sneaky. Love that they got Emmy's and Manny's help. David does deserve to be in a real relationship.
Loved Justin's little strip tease. Too bad we didn't get to see the ending.
Thanks for the update.
Date: Aug 02, 2017 7:18 pm Title: Explaining the Mister, Saying it Properly and Being Surprised
Run David run. I know we want Michael out of our hair , but David seems a nice guy.
Author's Response:
Yeah, even though he was a bit toadish in the series, I thought I would write him nicely here.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2017 6:07 pm Title: Explaining the Mister, Saying it Properly and Being Surprised
Gus is really coming into his maturity too bad Michael us falling further and further behind.
Michael and his need to be the center of attention is driving a further wedge between his relationship with everyone, but he doesn't care because as usual he doesn't see anything wrong with what he is doing.
David wake up and face the truth Andrew and Grady make you light up just by seeing their name on a card and Michael causes frown lines.
It doesn't take a nuclear physicist to see that Michael has used up all his chances.
Date: Aug 02, 2017 5:42 pm Title: Explaining the Mister, Saying it Properly and Being Surprised
Gus is just too adorable and smart! The opposite of Michael.
Poor David; he is in for a stalking period.
[Report This]Date: Aug 02, 2017 12:28 pm Title: Explaining the Mister, Saying it Properly and Being Surprised
Michaels idea of apologies and what's reasonable leaves a lot to be desired. I'm rooting for Grady... Andrew too.
Date: Aug 02, 2017 11:15 am Title: Explaining the Mister, Saying it Properly and Being Surprised
David needs to definitely drop Michael and go out with Andrew.
Gus is Chandra's hero. He's so got a future girlfriend there. :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2017 11:58 pm Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns
David there are those who deserve a chance and then there are others shouldn't be given one at all.
Michael has abused David's trust, home, kindness, generosity, patience it is time to kick Michael back to the curb where he belongs.
Michael only wants what he wants and after his continued rude behavior I would act like I never saw him before.
Good for George to tell off Michael too bad Michael only hears the voices in his head. (Though He Is Not Crazy)
Andrew and Grady seem like fun and it was nice of Andrew to buy David New clothes to replace the ones that got wet lol
Love that Gus is calling Michael Mr. Michael perhaps Gus is calling him that because Michael hasn't been much of an Uncle and at four he is not going to continue to placate Michael and his silliness anymore<giggles>
Despite Michael's antics it was a very sweet chapter :)
Author's Response:
Oh that Gus paragraph is eerie...you've been visiting again haven't you?
MissMerlot
Date: Aug 01, 2017 6:11 pm Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns
These "family" scenes are wonderful to read. New members are coming in regularly.
Grady and his "father" are going to make a huge shadow over Michael's future. Too bad he wasn't able to make some effort to calm David.
Poor Gus and Justin, getting the flu; at least, Brian was able to take care of them.
Date: Aug 01, 2017 4:52 pm Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns
Ooh new guy! Yeah!
[Report This]Date: Aug 01, 2017 12:28 pm Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns
I never thought I could feel sorry for David, but I do. I have a feeling that Andrew and Grady are going to be additional cast members. This is one interesting chapter and I wonder if Mr. Mikey knows he has one more chance?
Date: Aug 01, 2017 10:59 am Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns
David is a saint. I don't know how he can even stand Michael at this point.
It was so sweet of Brian to take such good care of Justin and Gus while they were sick.
Date: Aug 01, 2017 6:11 am Title: Nitpicking, Picnicking and Rose's Tongue has Thorns
David , get out while you still can.