Date: Aug 16, 2017 10:32 am Title: It's The End
I hate to see Brian so upset. I think he's finally done with Michael for good. I'm glad Justin was there to take care of him.
Grady's sister is home. I'm sure they'll both get into some mischief soon.
Thanks for the update.
Hugs,
Jessica
Date: Aug 16, 2017 5:33 am Title: It's The End
Why David you old dog you.
Date: Aug 16, 2017 5:17 am Title: It's The End
More, More, MORE, PLEASE! I absolutely LOVE this fic!
Deb
Author's Response:
Typing as fast as I can. Thanks again for the PB, I am so enjoying writing this!
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2017 4:06 am Title: It's The End
Michael makes Shit look smart!!
He was willing to jeopardize Brian's career and his ability to care for his children just to keep Brian all to himself.
WHAT A FUCKING ASSHOLE!!!
Thank Goodness for Randolph, George and Mel they have got Vance by the balls and planning to squeeze until there is nothing left.
Michael is about to learn that you don't hurt Brian Kinney unless you are prepared to be destroyed, in this game Michael armed himself with a water pistol and what is going to be aimed at him is a cannon and when the smoke clears it ain't going to be pretty.
Maybe he can bunk with Raymond or Lindsay? lol
David is surrounded by new friends, two adorable puppies and a man who leaves him breathless, that's a good start :)
Author's Response:
First line...stolen!
Yeah, he really didn't care that Brian could've been left destitute as long as he had him to himself! Which he still thinks he has a chance of...
Happy reading...or not bleach warning for next chapter.
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Aug 16, 2017 3:27 am Title: It's The End
Michael doesn't seem to realize he's in the soup. Love how David takes control of both Grady and his sister. Too Cute.
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2017 11:59 pm Title: Still Partying and Someone Puts a Knot in It
Anytime Michael is naked or semi-naked is a cause for revolution, too bad the stick couldn't have connected with his mouth.
He has some nerve behaving that he is superior to a bunch of five year olds, they could teach him a thing or two about being a grownup.
Gus is not inconsiderate that is and always will be Michael 'Whiny Bitch' Novotny, also Gus is more responsible and organized than Michael on his worse day.
I so wish Michael had been sent home especially after insulting Gus and being dismissive of Rebecca after she apologized.
But perhaps him being uninvited to the wedding will be more just?
Ray stayed over too?
Perhaps he and Michael can share a crib? lol
Author's Response:
With regards to Ray, let's just say that not all white knights help with the rescue of a damsel in distress, problem with Ray is that he's not just greedy for money, he's greedy for food...but he really shouldn't have tried that!
Happy reading!
MissMerlot
Date: Aug 14, 2017 5:37 pm Title: Still Partying and Someone Puts a Knot in It
Ha ha ha, Blake and David hoping Michael wouldn't have gone commando...
Jennifer is a naugthy woman, but in the end she had to ask THE question "do they have sex every day" and she didn't expect Emmett's answer.
Date: Aug 14, 2017 4:33 pm Title: Still Partying and Someone Puts a Knot in It
Aww, I bet Grady and his sister will soon be permanently united!
Nice chapter!
[Report This]Date: Aug 14, 2017 2:22 pm Title: Still Partying and Someone Puts a Knot in It
Can Michael be more childish. And for him to call Gus spoilt and irresponsible is ludicrious since he (Michael) is that and worse. A slumber party!! Great chapter!
Date: Aug 14, 2017 10:36 am Title: Still Partying and Someone Puts a Knot in It
Wow! That's a ton of people for a sleep over.
Michael is a bigger child than the kids. Just accept her apology and get over it. It was an accident.
Mother Taylor...very naughty.
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2017 6:48 pm Title: Let's Party...Part 2
Oh Man I thought it was funny Ray and Michael being on trash duty but Michael getting hit in the nuts had me rolling!!!
He so deserved that for everything he has done to try to suck the life out of Brian (Ewww, Sorry I put that out there) and everyone else.
Brian did try to help him be a success but a usual he abused it by treating Brian like an ATM with an endless surplus of cash.
Brian and everyone else work hard to be successful while Michael expects everything to be handed to him on a gold platter, as he lays on a silk draped chaise reading comics and being constantly praised by his loyal subjects. (See why Michael, Raymond and Lindsay are siblings separated at birth)
I am so proud at Rebecca she gave Michael exactly what he deserved, plus that girl would make one Hell of a softball player! ;)
Veri having Michael drenched with ice cold water was Perfection!
Now Peace can Reign cause the whiny twerp is out cold rofl
Fantastic Updates!! <hugs>
Author's Response:
Hiya,
Thanks! I had tears of laughter streaming down face when I typed it. And thanks for the image of Michael on a chaise...at least tell me he'd be dressed!
I have given you temporary respite from the whiny twerp but he comes back...like the proverbial bad penny...of course, at full and repellent volume1
Happy reading.
MissMerlot
Date: Aug 11, 2017 4:00 pm Title: Let's Party...Part 2
The end had me laughing really hard! Poor Michael, shot in the nuts and an icy shower!
Date: Aug 11, 2017 2:49 pm Title: Let's Party...Part 2
Very funny ending. Enjoying the story.
lah
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2017 2:30 pm Title: Let's Party...Part 2
This is the most fun party. Love how Rebecca gets Michael. Great chapter.
Date: Aug 11, 2017 10:05 am Title: Let's Party...Part 2
I can't stop laughing! Go Rebecca!!! She got to do what most of us have wanted to do for a long time.
Gus is so adorable. I know I keep saying that but he truly is. I love that he has a little crush on Justin. He just thinks he's the bestest thing ever. lol
Date: Aug 11, 2017 6:44 am Title: Let's Party...Part 2
That was mean and petty. Please do it again.
Author's Response:
Maybe later...you know should he be allowed to go to the wedding on the island, he could get zapped in the nuts by a jellyfish....
MissMerlot
[Report This]Date: Aug 11, 2017 12:48 am Title: Happy Birthday Gus! Happy Birthday Randolph! Let's Party...Part 1
Michael and Raymond share the same brain and fondness for blaming everyone else for their stupidity.
Raymond got spanked again and now he is going back to London and his humdrum life.
Michael will make a great pinata.. I mean pinata holder I hope those kids whack him alot lol
He had some nerve calling Gus a spoiled brat that's like anyone calling him a grownup, he doesn't know anything about Gus because he only sees him as another obstacle for Brian's attention, Gus could teach Michael about being a grownup while Michael could teach Gus nothing at all.
Emmett planning events for Brian.. Yes!!
David must really like Grady because he loves getting wet for him :)
Looks like the plan worked better than expected and hopefully David will be on his first date with Andrew and Grady <giggles>
Please let Michael say one more thing about Gus I so want to see Justin kick his flat Ass out! lol
Date: Aug 10, 2017 5:59 pm Title: Happy Birthday Gus! Happy Birthday Randolph! Let's Party...Part 1
David jumped once more in the water for the clumsy dog! The plan worked perfectly. What happened while they were changing their wet clothes?
I loved how Gus described Michael's attire.
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2017 1:09 pm Title: Happy Birthday Gus! Happy Birthday Randolph! Let's Party...Part 1
Wow. Just so much goodness. I like Dave taking down Mikey. I keep trying to picture Mikey in a bad suit. And the nerve of him thinking Gus is spoilt! Not to mention thinking he and Brian have a chance. Little Ruby, Andrew, Grady are also high points. In fact the whole chapter is one.
Date: Aug 10, 2017 10:57 am Title: Happy Birthday Gus! Happy Birthday Randolph! Let's Party...Part 1
I'm so glad the party is under way. I think Brian and Justin went overboard on clothes for Ruby. She's going to wear them once and be too big to fit into any of them...but she is Brian's daughter. ;)
Gus is so excited about his friends and his party. I'm glad he's having a great time. Can't wait for more.
Date: Aug 08, 2017 5:11 pm Title: Let's Rumble
Ah, Michael, hilarious and irritating at the same time. David has been right to let him go.
The part with Vance and Ted was funny too! He wanted Brian gone from the beginning, then with Stockwell. He got what he wanted, with all the consequences.
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2017 1:16 pm Title: Let's Rumble
Haha. Deb knows that Dave tossed Mikey aside and Mikey doesn't even get a chance to put his spin to it. Vance is finally getting what he deserves. I love the line
“Caroline, that was very naughty...funny but naughty.”
Hahaha!
Date: Aug 08, 2017 10:32 am Title: Let's Rumble
Yeah, I'm glad David finally dumped Michael. He is so whiny.
Can't wait for Gus and Randolph's party.
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2017 5:17 am Title: Let's Rumble
Oh You Are Wicked to tease with another chapter before the party ;)
Well David is free and all it took was Michael being Michael who has as usual has the maturity level of a piece of lint (Sorry Lint, That Was Cruel).
David is ready for a mature relationship while Michael is holding out for a fantasy that will never come true.
Gus was smart enough to make sure everyone got their own invitation and smart of Randolph to do the same.
Vance really should not be surprised that Brian is not going to help him, he put profit over loyalty and now it is biting his Ass hard lol
Raymond is being treated like a child (Let's face it Gus is more mature than him too) and Veri is enjoying it tremendously.
Oh this party is going to be Fun!! <grins wickedly>
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2017 2:23 am Title: Party Prep
I do hope the parties are going to be Great for some but not others lol
So Lindsay is just a gopher huh?
Not the glamorous lift she thought she would be leading <giggles evilly>
So since Lindsay thinks she is entitled to do whatever she wants is she planning to come back to Pittsburgh despite what her parents said??
Ray is still blaming Franc for his selfish behavior and he thinks he is being welcomed back, I hope he didn't make any plans?
So how long before David leaves with Andrew and Grady cause Michael is going to make a scene and with a large audience (Especially Brian) he us going to make sure all the attention is focused on him??