Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 28, 2020 4:43 pm Title: Chapter 3: What is Going On?

Claire is stupid and that stupidity will get her hopefully lots of jail time.

John was smart enough to record the conversation so it will give further credence that Mel and Lindsay are dangerous, cause even though Lindsay did all the talking Mel is still an accomplice.

Brian was a bit rash but he is scared so he can be forgiven for acting without thinking about everything first.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 01, 2019 6:56 pm Title: Chapter 3: What is Going On?

Jail for all those bitches sounds really tempting. How stupid are they really? Do they think they'll never get caught?

Yeah Brian handled the entire conversation with Justin badly. I hope they do talk to each other. Justin has yo make Brian understand that Justin would never take Gus from him.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2018 5:19 pm Title: Chapter 3: What is Going On?

Oh, wow, this is a good story.  Can't wait to see where you take it next.  Great writing.