I love suspense/thriller fics (I'm a BIG fan of Dean Koontz)...  Anyway, I gave this some thought, and I like the Gus and JR angle. Only, Michael has planted the evidence leading to it. He's upset because he has made some major screw-ups lately (as only Michael can do), and he hasn't been able to afford to give support money for JR for a long time, resulting in Mel being in the process of having his parental rights revoked. 

I really like this one...will have to think on it, once I get my other WIPs under control again! I swear for grits, you come up with some of the BEST ideas! 

HUGS,

~Nichelle