Date: Nov 27, 2017 12:49 pm Title: Nemesis
Poor Debbie.... of course she loves him since he’s her son, but she doesn’t like him (and shouldn’t)
the only reason I’m not worried about Justin is because this is a “prequel” lol
Date: Sep 30, 2017 10:22 pm Title: Nemesis
Michael and Ethan, let them commiserate together. What a pair they'd make.
Michael ruins his life and wants what doesn't belong to him. Somethings never change.
Justin! Found by the dumpster at Babylon? No! Just no! It's someone that looks like him. Either it has to be or if it's really justin then he isn't dead. And if it is, my bet is on that fucking fiddler.
Author's Response:
Sophiesmom,
If those two were ever together in anything we wrote they would be celibate. Wouldn't want to have to poke our eyes out.
Michael never thinks anything he does should get him into trouble.
I'm sure there is a question in there, but it's not one I can answer right now.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 29, 2017 6:19 pm Title: Nemesis
Michael is such a useless idiot. I can't understand how he thinks it's okay to treat his mother like that.
I'm pretty sure you would NOT DARE to kill our lovely Justin off so I guess it's someone who looks a lot like him.
Michael would be an obvious guess but I can't see someone as stupid as him doing this. Maybe Ethan or Brandon... They would have reason to go after Brian and Justin but then we have Craig (who already tried to hurt Brian in canon) but also Rickert or Stockwell. I'm looking forward to read more :)
Author's Response:
SandyGale,
Michael is a selfish, spoiled brat, and feels he is owed just for being her child.
You will have an answer soon.
The murderer will screw up and be caught.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Sep 29, 2017 2:36 pm Title: Nemesis
Omg...ethan and mikey...two pathetic losers...omfg..they are up to no good...i can only guess they are the only ones involved in the killings.
Author's Response:
Navneet,
Neither one of them is a good person in this story.
One is worse than the other.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 28, 2017 4:08 am Title: Nemesis
Oh no!!!!! What a cliffhanger! It can't be Justin, it must be someone looking like him; the hustler Brian got during Ethan's period, for example.
Author's Response:
Sno,
There will be more soon, we promise.
Everything will be explained.
~charming1 and Lorie~
[Report This]Date: Sep 28, 2017 2:55 am Title: Nemesis
Oh no. You can't leave us with "Holy fuck, it's Justin!" I have to say the rest of the story was great. Debbie realizing that Michael isn't the loving child she thought she gave birth to.
Author's Response:
YumYum,
Unfortunately many parents come to the realization that the child they raised used their free will to become something that the parent never anticipated.
More soon, the story isn't over.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 28, 2017 1:47 am Title: Nemesis
OK now we have two suspects. Have you read The Sunshine Files? They opened a shelter and had job study. I think this is a great idea. Good luck.
Author's Response:
Wellreadbunny.
No, I (Lorie) have never read The Sunshine Files.
Hope you are enjoying our story.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 28, 2017 12:02 am Title: Nemesis
Cliffhanger!!! Yikes!
Author's Response:
Chadmom,
More in a couple of days.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 27, 2017 10:02 pm Title: Nemesis
Well, I just don’t like that cliff hanger 😣. I’m loving this story. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
DidiPita,
Glad you're enjoying the story.
More soon.
~charming1 and Lorie~
Date: Sep 27, 2017 9:40 pm Title: Nemesis
Ahhhh. What a way to end, but I love this story. Love a good & evil Mikey.
Author's Response:
Sallyo,
Michael is being his normal nasty self.
~charming1 and Lorie~