Date: Sep 15, 2017 8:35 am Title: Chapter 2
Very perplexing - I've got no clue what's going on yet, except I'm wondering where Justin is . . . ? TAG
Author's Response:
I hope the following chapters helped you to figure out a few things?
Date: Sep 11, 2017 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
First off - love the banners they are super cool. I'm a Tibbs shipper myself. It's great that Abby and Tim did their thing and identified Bri. Did you move Babylon to Washington D.C.? Keep 'em coming.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! I try to have a different banner for each chapter. Hopefully I'll be able to finish them soon.
I loved to write that part, especially their chat about how good looking Brian is. Tony's jealousy was fun, too.
Yes, everything is in Washington D.C. here - Babylon, Liberty Avenue... Made more sense.
Thank you for your reviews. I'm glad you like the story so far.
Date: Sep 11, 2017 4:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Great job. Just like an episode.
Why id Tim afraid to go to Babylon? Is hevhiding sometjing too in your story?
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and compliment. We appeciate it.
No, he's not hiding anything. The McGee from the first seasons was rather shy, nervous and insecure a lot and we wanted a little bit of that for him :)