[Report This]Date: Oct 09, 2019 6:38 pm Title: For starting over
This is so different. 3 rd time reading it. Love it
Date: Jan 22, 2018 9:59 am Title: For starting over
Poor Hunter, to go through that after finally finding a family. I hope all of Brian's plans work out.
Date: Jan 13, 2018 5:55 pm Title: For starting over
So fabulous! That's right Brian, do things the way they should have been done!
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2017 11:54 pm Title: For starting over
I get the feeling all of Brian's lofty plans aren't necessarily going to workout the way he thinks? TAG
Date: May 17, 2017 6:22 pm Title: For starting over
Whoa! Michael went so far to get Brian! How could he imagine Brian would like to live in Stepford avenue in a house Ben and Michael chose, with Eli and Monty as neighbors...
Date: May 08, 2017 6:36 pm Title: For starting over
I'm asking you now...begging you to never give up on this story! Don't be discouraged by few reviews. Some people tend to wait a bit for a newer writer to post several chapters before they start reading. I've read 2 stories with this sort of concept, and neither have been finished. Very disheartening as it's such a terrific concept!
Was gutted at first, with Brian's reaction to waking up without his Sunshine. That's it's already been a whole year since he died. His total sense of desolation was heart breaking. Thank goodness for Marilyn! She'll be a terrific support system for him going forward. He seems to have a great start in mind. Seeing what happens with all the knowledge he has, how he's going to treat people now will be interesting. I don't see him putting up with any crap from anyone and they will all have to learn to accept this new and improved Brian.
I think though that it will also give him an advantage. He knows the true character of Emmett, Ted etc and will move forward with that knowledge.
Am really excited to get into this. Like I said, I love this idea and am looking forward to see what you do with this!! Keep writing!
Cheers
Elaine
Date: May 08, 2017 12:31 am Title: For starting over
It's going to be hard for Brian to remember that what he knows hasn't happened. It's difficult to not be upset with someone for something they haven't done yet.
I can't wait to see how this all turns out.
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2017 4:23 am Title: For starting over
Boy, I can't believe how wicked Michael is..er..was? At least Brian is heading in the right direction and with Mysterious Marilyn's help things should turn out for the better.