Date: Mar 27, 2018 7:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
The wax part was hilarious! I could only imagine the pain he was in, ouch!
I love when Faal is getting territorial; only, Luther and Grady don't get the hint, nor is Lindsey.
Date: Jun 26, 2017 2:56 pm Title: Chapter 12
I love how they are slowly and surely making sure that Lindsay and Michael will lose everything.
Date: Jan 21, 2017 8:10 pm Title: Chapter 12
Hahahha my stomach hurts from laughing,not just from Michael's scene but most of the episode..
Anyway thanks for answering about my curiosity about jewelry..
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2017 5:30 am Title: Chapter 12
Had to comment about how Luther thinks Grady being seen with Lindsay is a step up when she is basically a social praha, even if she does get Michael to drop the lawsuit against Phil I doubt they are going to let her have an in at any gallery in New York?
I really hope they don't drop it because he and Michael taking the stand will be very amusing and the New York gossips would love to spread there testimony around.
Those shoes Zee was wearing and carrying in her lap are Gorgeous and perhaps the reason why Talon wanted to know is because she plans on wearing them when she stomps on Luther's face and out the door lol
I think Craig is going to move that money into his personal account.
You are Astounding me again with this story and all the cruel stuff you do to Michael and Lindsay lol
Date: Jan 19, 2017 9:31 pm Title: Chapter 12
First off...that spa scene was most enjoyable. The fact that it is currently on a UBS stick is even better. It's teh gift that keeps on giving. I nearly busted a gut reading it and that Talon did all that.as much as I question her loyalies at times, I have to high five her on that one.
Seems Grady didn't get the reaction he and Luther had hoped for from Zee. lol. Na na na na naaaaaaaaaa. Seems they all kind of made asses of themselves. wonder why they'll try to get up to next. Their attempts are almost comical really.
Loving Ralph!! Can't wait to see what he has up his sleeve.
A shout out to Hunter is of course so necessary! Oh to have been a fly on the wall there. Beautifully done!
And Lindsey for a time was in her element, or at least she thinks she is. Oh if she only knew. Love that everyone is against her, some quietly, some not so much. Her parents were a hoot! Definitely put her in her place but good.
And now we find out about they whys of the jewlery. sneaky sneaky! Love it. It seems Talon is just as described. A btich, but an honest one. She seems to be fully on "our team". Can't wit till Luther finds out about everyone being against him and to such an extreme. he won't know what hit him!
Excellent!!
Cheers,
Date: Jan 19, 2017 8:48 pm Title: Chapter 12
ROTFLMAO!!
Oh you wicked, wicked girl. This chapter has te be THE most hilarious one you ever written and the most exquisite torture ever. Never knew hot wax could be this much fun.
So many people got their arses kicked in this chapter. Not only have Mickey but especially Twatzilla got the full blast. She's really out of everbody's good books.
Let's wait and see if both of them learned something from this evening.
Talon is simply marvelous. Playing Luther like that. I hope she gets away with it for she deserves it after being cheated on like that. Good for her to get Mickeys spa day taped. It could become quite a partypiece, wouldn't it.
Did a search for Zee's shoes. They are to die for..... especially in cobalt.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
XOXO
Meriam
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2017 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 12
Thomas and Zeon, I see they are going to be busy getting their lives back together. That means one less brother fighting over how to decorate the Bro-house. It's nice to see Zee and her brothers getting along and how happy Faal is for her. Everyone's off for NY and a showdown with the booby twins. I'm beginning to like Talon, especially with how she treats Ralph. She seems to have done a turnaround. The spa day with Michael was hilarious and if I got it right Talon had them video Michael's treatment. All that chest hair. Yuck. Grady wasn't nearly as bad as I thought he would be. Did Lindsay ever find Melody? Hunter and Miranda did a fabulous job, and Lindsay actually tried to take credit. Love how Steve and Brian didn't let Michael get away with saying shit. I'm still not sure what the coat tag number means. Lindsay's parents are there and they let Michael and Lindsay know that they are leeches. Now I'm glad we couldn't see the video and Michael's little you know what.
Author's Response:
You did indeed with the taping. And Talon needed Zee's coat tag number so she could put the USB port with the video of Michael's waxing from hell in the pocket. Grady gets worse...for some reason he finds them attractive....
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2017 7:19 pm Title: Chapter 12
Ronald called Lindsay and Michael Leeches! lol
I hope Lindsay and Michael continue the lawsuit it will be so funny when Lindsay gets the cold shoulder in every gallery in New York, but what will make it hilarious is that Grady and Luther are with her every time it happens. (Maybe get Michael banned from every comic book store too?)
Glad I wasn't drinking when I read the spa scene or I would have choked from laughing so hard, must have taken everything Jorge and his helpers had not to throw up looking at Michael and laughing at his twig and really tiny pebbles. (Talon is good and recording it is priceless)
Grady drooling over Brian isn't surprising it's him hitting on Lindsay that makes me sick.
So Ralph got his revenge on Michael I wonder if he has ever done that to Luther?
Lindsay trying to take credit for Hunter, Martine and Justin's achievement makes her look so pathetic.
Luther and some of his cohorts did not have the evening they were envisioning but everyone else had a wonderful time and it ended watching a buffoon getting his comeuppance.
Can't wait for more I could use more laughter :)
Date: Jan 19, 2017 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 12
So happy for Thomas and Zeus.
the quickie in the air was HOT!
but I don't think I'll ever laugh as hard as the waxing scene!!! Lol
Date: Jan 19, 2017 5:20 pm Title: Chapter 12
I still can't stop laughing!!! THIS!!!!!! OH THIS!!!!! Nicole, you are so evil... and I LOVE IT!!!
Happy Writing and HUGS,
~Nichelle