Date: Jun 26, 2019 5:04 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Poor Brian sure has the mantra: As long as he doesn't know, I can live with that... down pat.
So Justin is delusional when it comes to Ethan and his anger and jealousy. He's making a quick exit... stage left... maybe Ethan has some cuts on his hands. But without seeing him, he's not going to know. Damn... where is that security video?
I was going to quit for the night, but well, Mel and Ben just came in... gotta run...
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Sep 23, 2017 1:16 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Can't wait for whats next
[Report This]Date: Dec 04, 2016 1:54 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Oh boy, things are getting hot. Especially that shower scene. But I can't wait for Ben and Mel to tell all.
Date: Nov 26, 2016 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Yeah, a shower scene!!! Hot, hot, hot...
Will Justin really go to California?
Date: Nov 07, 2016 7:55 pm Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Deeply emotional chapter. Brian doing some real inner thinking and seeming to really understand his feelings towards Justin. Understanding that Justin needed to be with ethn for a time, but really....the time is up. He obviously wants Justin back, but wants Justin to come back on his own. He's sad that Justin will be leaving for a short time, but I do believe it will all work out. Ethan will be less than thrilled. Tough shit! It's what Justin needs. Moving out is the first step, going away is the next. Who knows what Ethan will do to try to convince Justin to stay...He's already proven himself to be unbalanced with what he did to teh jeep. The fact that Justin doesn't think he could do that is a bit worrying. Hopefully there is video footage of it to prove him wrong. I'm dying for justin to end it with the greasy little asshole. Please let it happen soon. Even if there is fall out, Justin will have support and protection.I can't stand the little fucker.
dum dum dum duuuuuuuuuummmmmm. OK girlfriend...the next chapter has to come soooooooooooooooooooon!! So Taryn has been brought into the picture now huh? At least more are becoming aware now. Again..this is going to be EPIC!
Brilliant! Lovely!! Exciting!!
Cheers,
Elaine
Date: Nov 07, 2016 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Wow this is like Dallas, Dynasty and Empire rolled into one. When the truth comes out what a mess this is going to be. Frankly, I have no idea how anyone (Mikey) could be so dumb to follow this plan, but idiots are born every day.
Justin is right he needs his own space. Brian should reflect on his prior behavior because it was so wrong at points.
Thanks for the yummy updates!!
Author's Response:
OMG!!!! How COOL is this review!! Thank you so very much! There definitely will be some serious talks and thoughts abounding between Brian and Justin. As for Michael.... yeah, I'm still looking for that one redeeming quality.
Thanks so much Gretchen for making my day!
Happy Reading,
~Nichelle
Date: Nov 07, 2016 8:23 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Loving, love love this fic!
Look forward to more
Happy writing
Nicole
[Report This]Date: Nov 07, 2016 6:46 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Darn I hoped we'd get to the big announcement in this chapter. Though this chapter was great with Justin and Brian coming more or less to an agreement. Enjoying this story a lot.
Date: Nov 07, 2016 3:07 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Thank you for not just one but two awesome new chapters tonight!!! Once again, of course, you leave me on the edge and immediately wanting more! I'm so anxious for our boys to find out what Michael and Lindsay have been up to and I'm so happy that Justin recovered so quickly! I can't wait for the next update!
Date: Nov 07, 2016 2:39 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
WOW!!! These last two chapters, all I can say is WOW.
I keep coming back to what exactly do they think will happen? Brian is going to open his arms and welcome these two after that type of violation. This is the plan of a deranged mind.
Cannot wait for another update to here what Ben & Mel are going to say.
Date: Nov 07, 2016 2:01 am Title: Chapter 14- DARK HORSE: Brian
Write fast Ms. 'Chelle. I want to know what Brian and Justian's reaction is to the news.
Sandy