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Reviewer: addict_writer Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2017 9:21 am Title: Chapter 1

I think I already commeted on this first chapter...but I'm starting reading this story again and....damn. The emotions. The feels. The heartbreak. 

I can feel exactly what their feeling - despair, horror, panic. Amazing work, ladies!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2017 3:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

So happy to see an update on this one. Thank you ladies. I'm off to read. TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2016 3:07 am Title: Chapter 1

This is going to be intense.  Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: sophie'smom Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2016 2:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really hope there is more to this story. I really like the twist. No matter what happened before Justin will be there for Brian. That is if Michael allows it.

Reviewer: Michelle Kinney Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2016 6:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hi Ladies,

 

I don't know what happened to my feedback that I left for this story. But I really love the start of this story. I feel really bad for Brian and I don't dobut this is goin to be a rough journey for the boys. I know Justin is really going to have be really strong for Brian. I'm hopping Gus will be able to help his daddy. Please post more soon!!!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2016 4:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Not sure if my reviews on that other site survived my banishment, but I just wanted to say again how excited I am about this new story. More, please! TAG

Reviewer: eureka1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2016 5:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Sally & Annie, I've been planning to read the first chapter of your story, so it seems fitting that it's the first one I try on the new site.

Wow, does this first chapter ever pack a punch! I felt like I was right there at Babylon, suffering the effects of the bombing with Brian, Justin, Jennifer, and everyone else. I wanted to vomit, seeing Todd without a leg.

Of course, I'm terrified for Brian, who's apparently mostly blind. I flashed back to the bashing when Brian claimed to be Justin's partner and rode in the ambulance with him. Now, it's Justin's turn to take that role with Brian.

You've pulled me completely into this bombing AU. I'm not sure I can say I'm looking forward to the next chapter, but I certainly want to know what happens next, how their love for each other helps Brian and Justin cope and move forward. I want to hear about the rest of the family, too.



Author's Response:

Aw thank you for that lovely review. That's what we tried to do here, draw you and get you feeling all the emotions from that night. And you're right, this is now Justin's time to step up and be Brian's partner. Hopefully he can handle it :) More to come VERY soon :)

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