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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 7:37 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Betrayal.

The keys were a very thoughtful idea: it shows Justin that Brian trusts him with the loft and also that the doors might be closed, but he can get out.

Reviewer: susi_in_love Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2016 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Betrayal.

Giving Justin keys is a really great idea. That should reassure him.

Reviewer: cookiebun Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2016 8:34 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Betrayal.

I think some of Justin's "trust" issues are out right jealousy... but that's not a bad thing.. just needs to be recognized :) 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2016 1:32 pm Title: Chapter 18 - Betrayal.

I can't help but think Justin was sexually abused, whether by his father or someone else. Am I reading into it wrong?



Author's Response:

When I was writing this, I only imagined that Justin was emotionally abused by Craig. I think the symptoms would be pretty much the same though. And what Craig did do was pretty horrendous, so you're not completely wrong about how it would all manifest itself. Hope you made it through to the more happy ending! TAG

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