Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2017 4:19 am Title: Chapter 4

What a relief to have Brian packing Michael, kicking him out of Britin: it's more than time!

Poor Hunter: almost all alone to face the event.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2016 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 4

I was afraid for Ben; I just hope Michael has nothing to do with what happened.

I loved how Mel put Michael and Lindsay in their places.

Author's Response:

No it was just pure bad luck on Ben and Hunter's part...but it gets better, especially for Hunter.

Oh yes the Marcus smackdown was given...and she's passed that trait onto Jenny.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2016 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

Woohoo go Mel! Omg how I wish she put Michael & Lindsay in their place on the show like this...so fabulous!

Thank God for Hunter & Brian! Does Michael even realize it's because of them that Ben is alive?

Author's Response:

Yeah you and me both. However, watch for Carl.  

Indeed he does, deep down in the soul he sold to the devil that is currently buried in hell, but he's Michael and an ass so there you go.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2016 8:04 pm Title: Chapter 4

That little SOB he was hastening Ben's death if he had bothered to pay attention or listen to Hunter Ben would have been better sooner, he used Ben being in the hospital to worm his way back into Brian's life and heart.

That Arrogant, No Good Bastard!!! That is so cold and so Michael. I so want to kick his Ass!!!!!!!!! He is planning his future without Ben bet he has been doing that for awhile now.

Thank Goodness Justin and Brian are in sync and have always made sure that Michael and Lindsay will never get a key to Britin.

I felt so bad for Hunter he knew it was more than pneumonia that was causing Ben's extreme weight loss, the doctor's should have caught that sooner or better yet Michael should have caught that sooner.

I got teary-eyed when Hunter was begging for Ben not to leave him.. getting teary-eyed just writing about it, I am so happy Brian listened to Hunter and got the doctor's to do more testing, so happy that Ben is getting better and that Michael has been called out for neglecting Hunter to the point that he ended up in the hospital beside Ben due to dehydration and exhaustion.

What made me happy was Mel, Deb and Jennifer calling out Michael and Lindsay about the key and Brian sending Michael's stuff to the loft which pretty much guarantees that Michael is no longer welcome at Britin. 

Jennifer calling out Michael for remembering about Ted having a key to Britin, thought he was too drunk to remember, also Deb questioning him about the money he got from Brian and Justin.

I was cracking up and had a smile to rival Justin's :)

I wish it was next weekend already.

Thanks for two Enthralling Chapters :)

Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked it.  I have to admit that when I was speaking the hospital scene out [please tell me I am not the only one who says the lines out loud to make sure they sound right on paper as it were] I was in floods.  

Yep indeed Michael is planning his future without Ben but he's also...let's face it this will not be a surprise to anyone...planning it without Hunter, just saying remember Ben loves his boy.

Hunter is a good kid everyone sees that but Michael, like in the series I feel, is too blinded by his jealousy of his closeness to Ben to see that.  Trust me things for Hunter get a whole lot better.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2016 3:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

Woah!  Loving Carl, Jenny and Jennifer.  They are taking up for Hunter, who it seems is the only one of their family who actually cares that Ben is not doing well.  Brian, against his better judgement lent Michael a lot of money.  Money he hasn't really used on his shop, which he hasn't opened preferring to stay at Britten.  Money that can be used to get the things Ben and Hunter need to get better.  But Mikey is being selfish and Lindsay is too.  Mel summed it up nicely, will they listen?

Author's Response:

Yeah always thought after the jail scene that Carl should've been more authoritarian so here's my take in it.  And watch for Michael a slap down Carl gives him and the reaction from Debs.  Like I said C3 heralded the beginning of the end of the Brian and Mikey show but that little bugger isn't going down without a fight...cackle-cackle.