Date: Jan 10, 2017 11:09 am Title: Chapter 27
Of course he wants the food. That stupid receptionist got what she deserved.
Date: Sep 18, 2016 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 27
Mixed emotions here: anger, fun and joy.
Fortunately, Emmett, Blake and Cynthia were here to save the day.
Brian is completely falling for his daughter, the only kid he was able to follow from conception to birth.
I especially loved:
- "“Papa told us to remind you you're too big to be climbing on anything.” Gus tells me. Brian just earned a night on the couch."
- "“Five bucks, dad.” Mr Smarty Pants Jackson tells me."
- "Only Justin could sleep through giving birth."
- "Chastity, as in you know in I will kill anybody who tries to take it."
- "I swear she was smiling at me, I know I was probably grinning like an idiot."
[Report This]Date: Sep 05, 2016 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 27
The baby is here, the baby is here! And smack dab in the middle of drama. That Cynthia didn't fire the receptionist right away is troubling. It's a good thing that Gus and Jackson are looking out for Justin, because if he'd fallen off a ladder things could have been worse. How sweet that Brian left to get Justin his tuna sandwich. I wonder who the guy in Brian's office was? Surely not Mikey, Frank probably knows Michael. You write the bestest stories.
Date: Sep 05, 2016 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 27
Labor for Labor Day! Nicely done!
i love that Justin asked for the sandwich, it's perfect!
Rileys here and now the two are in love it's so wonderful!
And checking the hand eye coordination is adorable. Jackson and Gus are too cute.
All that's to see its a terrific fast paced fun story and i thank you for writing!
Date: Sep 05, 2016 4:40 am Title: Chapter 27
So Riley Taylor-Kinney has made her debut in spectacular fashion!! So glad that Brian was there for the birth of this child! I loved his little quip about naming her Chastity. It was so father-esque, how could anyone not love it? I'm glad that Brian told Justin what the real deal was and that he listened. That long-desired tuna sandwich probably won't taste the same now that Riley isn't 'asking' for it, LOL
As for the bitchy receptionist, I hope she enjoys her time on the unemployment curcuit. I can't imagine that she will receive a glowing recommendation from the staff at Kinnetik for being an arrogant asshole. Give a person a little position and it goes to their head, eh? Well 'Head' deez nuts bitch! No sympathy for stupidity!!
Great Chapter and lookinng forward to MORE!
Write On Star,
~Nichelle
Date: Sep 05, 2016 2:55 am Title: Chapter 27
OMG! A Riley and a tuna sandwich! What more could a man want?
This is such a fun romp. Can't wait for more.