Reviews For A Mother's Disdain
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Reviewer: purpledee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2021 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 12

Loving this story.

I think I missed something; is there something in a previous chapter about Brian getting an email from the Mel & Lindz about not visting for Christmas?  I have looked back several chapters and can't find it.  If I missed it could you tell me which chapter, so I can catch up?

Thanks

Deb L.



Author's Response:

I didn't actually include the email.  I just had Brian and Justin talk about it.  I sometimes think I add too much detail while other times I feel like I should add more.  The email was just infured. 

Reviewer: Frosty70 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2021 3:55 pm Title: Chapter 12

Father Tom former Military Police. What a great idea. I am so enjoying this story. Great work!--Cat

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2021 2:35 pm Title: Chapter 12

Gus is melting Joan's heart.  And everyone is pairing up.  I love happy endings and I'm hoping that we get one here.

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