[Report This]Date: Oct 26, 2020 8:27 am Title: Chapter 22
I think you'll find you've made an enemy in Craig Taylor. He will never forget this. OMG - a LOL moment! Bring it on Craig, do your worst...
Emmett? Campy and oh so colorful? And the office needs more color? Everybody better look out! I'd love to see Emmett bring in every color of the ranbow and start decorating Craig's office with him sitting right there! Or maybe he should borrow Debbie's velvet cat painting and a few of her clowns and knick-knacks.
Craig's threats had me shaking my head. Brian owns 51%. And all of Craig's bluster about finding a loophole and getting Brian out of there - is just hot wind that he shouldn't have wasted. Mr. Business-savvy, aka Brian Knney, wouldn't take in a meeting like this without making certain every i was dotted and every t crossed. And the bottom line is with 51%, Brian can oust Craig right out the door. Then Craig can cry all the way to the poor house. Geez, some people are SOOO stupid!!!
Looking forward to more of this business venture. (and yes, the skating.)
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response:
Apparently Chris Hobbs, Sr. had no idea who he was dealing with. I don't see how he couldn't, though, after how Brian so effortlessly handled him in that meeting. Craig besting Brian in this 'verse or any other really is laughable at best! At least he won't in any I ever write - LOL.
I did enjoy the Emmett scene no matter how brief. It was fun, and I could see Emmett in that little scene.
There are only 3 chapters remaining, so the conclusion is just around the corner.
Thanks for your comments!
:)
Date: Oct 26, 2020 2:08 am Title: Chapter 22
Hi,
There are so many aspects to this story that I
especially enjoy.
I have gone ice skating. Well… to be more exact,
ankle skating. I think you know whatI mean. I still
don’t know how people actually stand up on those skates and we here we have descriptions of
Justin speeding on the ice, turning or whatever
you call it, and actually jumping. Male/female
figure skating is one of my favorite sports during
the winter Olympics.
I also thought it was so clever for Justin to show in
almost every way how much he idolizes and loves
Brian without verbalizing and not putting Brian
into emotional situations. Of cause now that
Brian has said it, as Justin surmised, now what?
Emmett? I don’t know his role in this story is, but
I am guessing it will be outrageously funny.
Right, right, not funny to Craig. Who cares?
Once again, thank you for this wonder story. As I
said before, I am truly enjoying it.
DavidR
Author's Response:
Hi!
I'm really glad you're enjoying this story. For sure, this one is a bit different, and I really enjoyed writing it.
I do love professional figure skating, most especially at the Olympic level. I did try to write those moments with as much detail, and hopefully, visualation that I can manage. And I do know what you mean. I have such awe and respect for professional skaters. They make it look so simple, when I know it's not. Truly a thing of beauty.
Emmett didn't have a large role in this story, but where he does appear, I think he was fun. At least, I hope so.
There are only three more chapters to come now, so things should be wrapping up soon.
Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm so glad you like this one.
:)