Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2020 12:54 am Title: Chapter 3

Nice update! 

I think I'm on Brian's side... I'm a city girl and I don't think I'd be able to sleep downstairs either!

 

Author's Response:

Glad you like it.  Having fun with it.  It is so different than I usually write.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2020 1:56 pm Title: Chapter 3

Read chapters 2 and 3.  Wonderful story.  I can understand Brian's fear of wolves.  Never encountered one or was told a story like that, but I was terrified of them when I was young.  In my sixties, went with my family to see Santa and live reindeer and they took us on a sleigh ride to see the wolves that they had.  They were in large cages with wire tops, no way to escape, and I was so scared and nervous I nearly fainted.  I didn't say anything because I felt foolish, but on the way back, they slowed down to show us the young wolves which were behind a fence, but about 3 feet away from us. They were beautiful, but I have never been more terrified in my life.  I swear they sense when people are afraid and stare right at that person. Everyone was taking pictures and I was shaking so badly I couldn't even hold the camera level.  Got a few interesting pictures. I feel like I could see that wolf watching Justin. Just proved how amazing your writing is.  Can't wait to see where you are going with this story.  Hope all is well with you.  Take care and stay safe.

Author's Response:

That's a great compliment.  Thank you.