Date: Mar 17, 2020 10:13 pm Title: CHAPTER 9
Plz update ssssssssssoon luved it
Date: Mar 02, 2020 5:44 pm Title: CHAPTER 9
Ack! That's quite the cliff hanger... TAG





Date: Feb 27, 2020 2:57 am Title: CHAPTER 9
Wow, wonderful chapter. OMG, Michael took McKenna. And, who got shot. Great cliffhanger. Can"t wait to see where you go next. Fantastic writing.





Date: Feb 26, 2020 11:59 pm Title: CHAPTER 9
Okaaay! Lindsay's been shot, Justin stabbed, so who's the third person on the floor in a pool of blood? Also Michael better hope the police find him before brian does!!
A bit naughty leaving it on such a cliffhanger! Hope that means next chapter is soon?
Thanks
Deb L





Date: Feb 26, 2020 5:20 pm Title: CHAPTER 9
What an eventful chapter and so much drama. I'm worried about the people bleeding on the floor and for McKenna. Evil cliffhanger!
Knowing Brian and Justin, it was pretty obvious that they will reconnect in all the possible ways.
Beautiful baby!





Date: Feb 26, 2020 2:46 pm Title: CHAPTER 9
Omg! You didn’t! Gahhhh! But sooo good.





Date: Feb 26, 2020 1:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 9
What a cliff hanger. Who are the three people shot and how do you get Mckenna back safely? Hurry with your next chapter, please!