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Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 6:25 am Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

I absolutely love Hunter's reasoning that Michael couldn't have done it because he wouldn't have a chance against Justin because Justin would kill him!

I am so glad Emmett asked Brian about Michael claiming that Brian begged him to come to the hospital. That has always pissed me off how easily everyone believed Michael's lies and that one was such a petty and pointless lie.

Brian's descriptions of Emmett and Ted - hysterical! Em is so happy to be the ‘warm flat champagne'. And Ted calling himself ‘Mr. Vanilla'! LOL!

Poor Jay-Ray didn't get to listen to Brian describe taking Justin's virginity, but I have a feeling that she wouldn't have much trouble getting either Gus or Hunter to tell her.

Brilliant idea bringing David back to corroborate that Michael's knee was injured that night!

Really looking forward to the next chapter!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 10, 2019 1:09 am Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

Oh Crap! Michael Is So Dead They May Have To Bury Him Thrice!

If they have the medical report and a statement from the from the doctor and nurse who treated him then there is no way he can un-prove all the facts.

And I bet he stupidly called his Cuntly, White In Crime to gloat?

Thanks For the Update 😃

Reviewer: The SNO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 5:47 pm Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

I never thought I would appreciate David's appearance! Well done! Who did contact him? Carl? Brian? Somebody else?

Jenny is hilarious and so is Ted, the vanilla friend.

Emmett is very observant and a very great friend too!

I hope Daphne will join the fireworks.

I love these "V3" and "My legs follow the mind of my cock".

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 3:00 pm Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

So it has taken 15 years for things to catch up with Michael.  Wonderful.  Jen Jay is so precocious, just how old is she?

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 1:44 pm Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

Can Michael dig his grave any deeper? No one but the blonde harpy is on his side. Ain't that a shame. She'll throw him under the bus as quickly as she can throw him.

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 12:34 pm Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

Interesting concept. Yes, I can imagine just how Michael would pale upon seeing David, as he would be the only one able to testify to Michael's injury.

Lindsay trying to separate them... was this about her interfering and Justin going to NY... or... did she purposely put Justin in Ethan's path?

Great update! I especially like the fact that you brought up the night Gus was born... I recently talked with Wren regarding that same plot, and convinced her to take that very idea and run with it.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it. And again thank you for the plot point! I hadn't thought of that angle for Ethan. 

Happy reading

Hugs - Nicoole

 

Reviewer: mamab Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2019 12:14 pm Title: The First Time Ever He Saw His Face

Oh wow, what a great chapter.  I liked Dr. David more than Mikey so I am happy he is on Brian & Justin's side.  Love this story.  Fantastic writing as always.

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