Date: Jan 28, 2022 5:48 am Title: Chapter 35
Even if I get the feeling that Lindsay means it honestly and also regrets her behavior, I'm sorry, I just can't stand her. I honestly think it's cheeky that she took Gus to the playground when it was agreed that Mel would take him. And then she sits there and watches them both the whole time. It's like going to the zoo. No idea. In my opinion she kind of ruined the carefree time Justin wanted to spend with Gus. If I were Justin, that would have removed me further from her, but with this short greeting he shows that he seems to have more strength of character than I have... ;-)





Date: Aug 12, 2019 7:31 pm Title: Chapter 35
Whoa! Another punch in the guts! Amazing chapter!
Lindsay is slowly becoming "decent" and reserved.
Brian is opening up to her and I hope she will be a true friend and keep all he said to herself.
Date: Jun 29, 2019 3:50 am Title: Chapter 35
Just love the story, hope all is well with you and your Mom.. Cant wait for the update
Date: Jun 24, 2019 2:30 pm Title: Chapter 35
Nice character development for Lindsey here. TAG





Date: Jun 24, 2019 1:58 am Title: Chapter 35
It's Amazing how much I like this Lindsay and her thoughts. Looking forward to finding out how Justin feels.





Date: Jun 24, 2019 1:34 am Title: Chapter 35
Great update. I love this loving, caring Brian and Lindsay finally realizing that she was at blame for things. Wonderful writing.
Date: Jun 24, 2019 12:29 am Title: Chapter 35
Another chapter that had my chest tight and tears hitting the corner of my eyes. Aching for Brian, who has finally learned what it is he truly wants and needs and is not afraid to show it and admit it.
At the same time, I had an under-laying of anger. Why Lindsay felt she had the right to continue to sit there when Justin wouldn't acknowledge her... when Brian shot her a steely look... she should have gotten up and went to the car and let Mel come out and wait.
Angrier still when she felt she had the right to question Brian... force him to talk. When Brian said: “That was quite the risk you and smelly-Mellie took this morning, Lindsay. Was it worth it?” Brian should have WALKED AWAY! Lindsay thought the underlining meaning was FOR HIM. True. But selfish Lindsay didn't think what that betrayal could have done to Justin. That BETRAYAL... by Mel, by Lindsay, could have set Justin back. Lindsay's just a nosy bitch. How is he? How is he? she doesn't deserve to know.
Thank you for another chapter, even though I was angry the whole time I read it.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jun 24, 2019 12:02 am Title: Chapter 35
Holy shit that was beautiful, just beautiful! There is pure poetry in your words Kerri! Can't wait for more....





Date: Jun 23, 2019 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 35
Perhaps Justin doesn't feel comfortable at the lift because of the revolving the didn't just include friends who didn't understand boundaries but tricks who came and went with rapidity?
The loft I s s source of pain and pleasure for Justin and it is Brian's Conan where no one was allowed to remain and the fact that Justin was given frequent access was Joy and Heartache because as easy as it was to get through w door it was harder when you forced out.
Brian and Justin had no real privacy there because The Family saw it as Brian's Stud Pad Of Legend and not Justin's home.
An unlocked door is Freedom to Come and Go but it also comes with burdens of no safe haven no protection from the cruelty of outside forces.
Brian is not being pushy by letting Justin decide when he is ready to tell him why he won come to the loft, he is keeping everything involving him and Justin close to the chest his relationship with Justin is not up for The Family discussion or mocking.
Lindsay is realizing that her place is just as a friend and Nothing More.
Thanks For the Update 😃