Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 10, 2019 1:15 am Title: Chapter 8

Great ending.  Sometimes it takes a life altering experience to change your life.  I recently "retired" from a job I had for 25 years.  I am working full time at a different position using the skills I honed at my last job in the last 7 years.  I love my job and the lack of stress and freedom I have at my new position is amazing.  I no longer worry about all the things I have to do at work on any given day.  My boss, like Brian, gets it and I am so blessed  I love how the story was about Rob but also about his relationship with Brian.

 

New ideas-  You could go way way into the futuree-  retirement for Brian and maybe Justin-  Brian retires but Justin still works.  You've already done Brian gets hurt and Justin gets hurt.  YOu could do a story about Molly or Jennifer in this verse.  You could move forward with the new company.  They are doing some amazing things with standing chairs and exoskeletons.  

 

You could always go sci fi and have a cure for SCI ( Spinal Cord injury) and have Brian have to decide if he would go for the cure after having lived his life with SCI for 25+ years

 

So many ideas -  but I jsut lvoe your writing-  you could come up with a new universe too.

Author's Response:

Thank you! <3 I'm so glad you loved the ending! It was hard not to give it away in my last response to you...ha. I don't know that I'll ever go sci-fi as that isn't my thing, but Kinnected will probably be playing a bigger part in the near future. (Brian really liked that exoskeleton ;)) I've got Gus coming up next, then Justin (and some new developments for Brian), Cynthia, then back to Brian I think (with new developments for Justin). Jennifer is definitely on my radar. I'll have to think about Molly -- that could be interesting!